Feedbacks plz..

Share your music, collaborate, and partake in monthly music contests.
sooqi
KVRer
3 posts since 22 May, 2018

Post Mon May 21, 2018 9:12 pm

Hi all,
i make this track and welcome to leave your feedbacks..
thanks!!
https://soundcloud.com/soo-chee/gone

User avatar
wagtunes
KVRAF
13629 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Feedbacks plz..

Post Tue May 22, 2018 2:32 am

Just some random thoughts.

The kick in places is very thin. There is no bottom to it at all. The main riff synth, in places, seems to need some mid range EQ carving. It is a bit distorted.

Piece is okay. Personally I would have liked a little more variation in the melody but that's just personal preference.

Mikelo
KVRian
1321 posts since 10 Mar, 2004

Re: Feedbacks plz..

Post Tue May 22, 2018 3:22 am

Very disjointed. Needs bass end. Need to scoop out those frequencies at both ends and middle on most, if not all tracks.
Look at the size of my dongle

User avatar
layzer
KVRAF
5647 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Feedbacks plz..

Post Tue May 22, 2018 3:25 am

the spot between 1:21 and 1:37 was my favorite part :phones:
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

Return to “Music Cafe”