Trapped in the Core

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biodiode
KVRist
402 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK

Post Mon May 28, 2018 11:12 am

My latest composition for your listening pleasure: https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/trapped-in-the-core

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13612 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Trapped in the Core

Post Mon May 28, 2018 11:30 am

Mixed feelings on this one. Mix is fine. Sounds are fine. Arrangement seemed a little loose and without direction in places. Harmonic structure a bit fuzzy at times. Ending was kind of huh? Also, I think melody could have been better defined. Seems the piece was too riff based.

All in all, not bad. Just those few minor nit picks, which is all just personal taste anyway so take it with a minute grain of salt.

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biodiode
KVRist
402 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK

Re: Trapped in the Core

Post Tue May 29, 2018 11:43 am

Thanks for the feedback, you should have heard the original I had put together :hihi: I trashed a good chunk because I thought it was too repetitive. Frustration may have got the better of me on this track as I had lived with it for too long.

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