Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Post Fri Jun 29, 2018 4:45 pm

https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/where-do-we-belong

An unfinished track using only SonicCharge Plugins and the beautiful Cellspace soundbanks from Ghostwave Audio.
Quite some work to do but your comments and feedback a very much appreciated.
Thank you for listening.
Last edited by jethrobull on Sat Jun 30, 2018 8:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
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wagtunes
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13400 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:06 pm

My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.75

Comments: When you say unfinished, do you mean the mix, the arrangement, melody? Hard to know what to comment on without knowing what's left to be done. Melody wise, it's minimalist but moving in arrangement so it works. Mix does sound like it's not quite there yet so that's probably what you're referring to by unfinished but not sure if that's all. What you have so far is pretty good for unfinished. Some finished tracks don't sound this good. So well done so far.

Eauson
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836 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Fri Jun 29, 2018 6:03 pm

Nice track, picking up high freq ringin @ beginning on higher notes, intensional? Noticeable on small speakers and headphones, may not on larger setup.
Strings nice, bit of added warmth with volumes short increase at certain stages, verb or saturation.
Overall pleasant track has afx feel, would like variation on beat, bit of a click on kick..
Other than that
:tu:
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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Sat Jun 30, 2018 6:32 am

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.75

Comments: When you say unfinished, do you mean the mix, the arrangement, melody? Hard to know what to comment on without knowing what's left to be done. Melody wise, it's minimalist but moving in arrangement so it works. Mix does sound like it's not quite there yet so that's probably what you're referring to by unfinished but not sure if that's all. What you have so far is pretty good for unfinished. Some finished tracks don't sound this good. So well done so far.
Hi and thank you for listening. Really appreciate your comments and the feedback system :tu: . Yeah,sorry it's mainly the mix that's unfinished. I wont be adding any more sounds/instruments. Just maybe some fills and a little more percussion. Some tweaking of the arrangement slightly.
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

mevla
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1596 posts since 3 Nov, 2015

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:25 am

Nice track, nice composition. The Ghostwave sounds are very nice. Synplant is nice. It was also nice to hear sounds from Microtonic which are more acoustic.

Cheers.

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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Wed Jul 04, 2018 3:47 am

Eauson wrote:Nice track, picking up high freq ringin @ beginning on higher notes, intensional? Noticeable on small speakers and headphones, may not on larger setup.
Strings nice, bit of added warmth with volumes short increase at certain stages, verb or saturation.
Overall pleasant track has afx feel, would like variation on beat, bit of a click on kick..
Other than that
:tu:
Hey thank you for listening. I really appreciate your feedback :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Sat Jul 07, 2018 12:16 am

mevla wrote:Nice track, nice composition. The Ghostwave sounds are very nice. Synplant is nice. It was also nice to hear sounds from Microtonic which are more acoustic.

Cheers.
Thank you for taking the time to listen. Yes they are great soundbanks. Synplant still amazes me. Can't wait for the update. :hyper:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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seismic1
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9012 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Fri Jul 13, 2018 3:15 pm

This one manages to be both sombre and uplifting at the same time. You're playing with my head again. Nice choice of sounds. I really liked the big sounding bass, almost like a pipe-organ. It worked very well with the sounds in the higher registers, which might explain the contrast I noted earlier. The microtonic percussion was great too.

Good work :)

fastlanephil
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586 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:54 pm

Nice track!

An interesting combination moods. As your title implies, sort of purgatorial.

Richard deHove
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331 posts since 23 Mar, 2016

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:23 pm

Really liked the mood until the drums came in. They pulled things back into the ordinary, especially as the pattern then didn't change much and the drum sounds were also quite standard. Instead of drums, an interesting lead sound would have made this a far more emotional and deep track imo. That said, I still liked it very much, so put me in the 'positive reply' camp.

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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Wed Jul 18, 2018 2:23 pm

seismic1 wrote:This one manages to be both sombre and uplifting at the same time. You're playing with my head again. Nice choice of sounds. I really liked the big sounding bass, almost like a pipe-organ. It worked very well with the sounds in the higher registers, which might explain the contrast I noted earlier. The microtonic percussion was great too.

Good work :)
As always I really appreciate your comments and feedback Tim. Sorry to mess with your head but now you can have a little glimpse of what is going on in mine :D :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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jethrobull
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1361 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from England,UK

Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Post Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:37 pm

fastlanephil wrote:Nice track!

An interesting combination moods. As your title implies, sort of purgatorial.
Thank you for listening and the feedback.I really appreciate it! :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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