My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

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Aro
KVRist
33 posts since 16 Mar, 2018 from Canada

Post Fri Jul 06, 2018 4:29 am

Here's one of my recent tunes. Its created with almost all Absynth instances, except for one vocal track. I welcome feedback.

Thanks for listening.

https://soundcloud.com/lionsclub-1/my-b ... e-art-thou

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13409 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Fri Jul 06, 2018 6:57 am

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Love the synth sounds on this one. Performance a little static but a lot of this genre is so nothing new there. Definitely an enjoyable listen. Definitely liked the variety in the arrangement.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13409 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Fri Jul 06, 2018 6:57 am

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Love the synth sounds on this one. Performance a little static but a lot of this genre is so nothing new there. Definitely an enjoyable listen. Definitely liked the variety in the arrangement.

Aro
KVRist
33 posts since 16 Mar, 2018 from Canada

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Sun Jul 08, 2018 4:20 am

Thanks for the review wagtunes! I appreciate!

DeeFoxx
KVRer
20 posts since 30 Jun, 2018

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:32 am

The first 1:30 minutes sounds good. The transition moments could use some subtle changes around mixing one arrangement to the next. Specifically I'm talking about 2:14. The kick needs some tailoring too just to make it stand out a bit more. I think the kick kind of gets lost in the mix. Good sound design though I enjoyed your variations.

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Jace-BeOS
KVRAF
4681 posts since 7 Jan, 2005 from Corporate States of America

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:49 am

Interesting sounds. Interesting structure. I'll have to listen to it again, on a proper sound system, as I was thinking the vocal is buried or obstructed by some of the synth sounds...
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Aro
KVRist
33 posts since 16 Mar, 2018 from Canada

Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Post Mon Jul 09, 2018 3:54 am

Thanks DeeFoxx and Jace-BeOS for your input and for listening. I will take what you said into consideration.

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