My new song. Half Way Whole (rock)

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an-electric-heart
KVRAF
1550 posts since 13 Jun, 2008 from Napier,New Zealand

Post Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:37 pm

New song, check it out. I didn't take this one too seriously, I have a new album coming up but this won't be on it, it'll just be a b-side. I was really just taking Native Instruments 80s drums and session horns for a drive, I only recently got them and wanted to take them for a spin :D

https://soundcloud.com/anelectricheartm ... -way-whole

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13614 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: My new song. Half Way Whole (rock)

Post Thu Jul 12, 2018 2:38 am

My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 10

Overall - 9.375

Comments: Very catchy tune. Vocals a little pitchy, but they work in the context of the song's genre. Very well done.

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an-electric-heart
KVRAF
1550 posts since 13 Jun, 2008 from Napier,New Zealand

Re: My new song. Half Way Whole (rock)

Post Thu Jul 12, 2018 3:04 pm

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 10

Overall - 9.375

Comments: Very catchy tune. Vocals a little pitchy, but they work in the context of the song's genre. Very well done.
Cheers! :tu:

fastlanephil
KVRian
620 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: My new song. Half Way Whole (rock)

Post Thu Jul 12, 2018 11:12 pm

It’s not a real strong song and sounds a little rushed but is quite listenable and basically uplifting. It sounds like a decent B side track or an out take that ends up on an album rerelease on a streaming site.

Heck, over half of the songs on the Beatles White Album were potential out takes weren’t they?

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an-electric-heart
KVRAF
1550 posts since 13 Jun, 2008 from Napier,New Zealand

Re: My new song. Half Way Whole (rock)

Post Thu Jul 12, 2018 11:22 pm

fastlanephil wrote:It’s not a real strong song and sounds a little rushed but is quite listenable and basically uplifting. It sounds like a decent B side track or an out take that ends up on an album rerelease on a streaming site.

Heck, over half of the songs on the Beatles White Album were potential out takes weren’t they?
You got it. I've got a single coming out soon and wanted to chuck a b-side together to go with it on bandcamp, so not that I tried to make a 'bad song', but more a song that was 'quickly written and produced' and not as refined as it could be because I know that it's not a keeper anyway. :hihi:

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