just dropped this sick new beat

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lil big Dillon
KVRer
12 posts since 8 Jul, 2018

Post Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:20 pm

ok i know it's bad
what stands out the most as being bad?
why is this so bad?
help :(

https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/house-8-11-2018

oxygenmask
KVRist
83 posts since 4 Mar, 2004

Re: just dropped this sick new beat

Post Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:27 pm

That pad is awful. Maybe swap it for something more subtle? I like the main synth riff. Maybe more rhythm in your bass line? Maybe beef up the percussion underneath? It's tough to tell because I hate the pad so much, so I would definitely start there.

lil big Dillon
KVRer
12 posts since 8 Jul, 2018

Re: just dropped this sick new beat

Post Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:54 pm

ya but its probably not worth the effort thanks for the advice f**k this song imma start over :/

AnX
KVRAF
3026 posts since 17 Nov, 2015

Re: just dropped this sick new beat

Post Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:07 pm

lil big Dillon wrote: what stands out the most as being bad?

The lingo

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el-bo (formerly ebow)
KVRAF
10535 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away

Re: just dropped this sick new beat

Post Fri Aug 10, 2018 10:21 pm

AnX wrote:
lil big Dillon wrote: what stands out the most as being bad?

The lingo
You got there just before me :lol: :lol:

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