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lil big Dillon
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10 posts since 8 Jul, 2018

Postby lil big Dillon; Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:20 pm just dropped this sick new beat

ok i know it's bad
what stands out the most as being bad?
why is this so bad?
help :(

https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/house-8-11-2018
oxygenmask
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78 posts since 3 Mar, 2004

Postby oxygenmask; Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:27 pm Re: just dropped this sick new beat

That pad is awful. Maybe swap it for something more subtle? I like the main synth riff. Maybe more rhythm in your bass line? Maybe beef up the percussion underneath? It's tough to tell because I hate the pad so much, so I would definitely start there.
lil big Dillon
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10 posts since 8 Jul, 2018

Postby lil big Dillon; Fri Aug 10, 2018 6:54 pm Re: just dropped this sick new beat

ya but its probably not worth the effort thanks for the advice f**k this song imma start over :/
AnX
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2805 posts since 17 Nov, 2015

Postby AnX; Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:07 pm Re: just dropped this sick new beat

lil big Dillon wrote:what stands out the most as being bad?



The lingo
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el-bo (formerly ebow)
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10354 posts since 24 May, 2009, from A galaxy, far far away

Postby el-bo (formerly ebow); Fri Aug 10, 2018 10:21 pm Re: just dropped this sick new beat

AnX wrote:
lil big Dillon wrote:what stands out the most as being bad?



The lingo


You got there just before me :lol: :lol:

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