This is Drunken Monkey Style 101 ( Updated Version )
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- KVRian
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- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
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Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
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Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 7.5
Overall - 7.75
Comments: Love the wah bass. Appears to be a loop for about half the track. Then it seems to drift into some subtle variations before resuming. I guess this is kind of a beat? Personal preferences, top line and kick to cut through a little more. Have you considered adding some kind of rap or lead line to this track? Kind of screams out for it.
Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 7.5
Overall - 7.75
Comments: Love the wah bass. Appears to be a loop for about half the track. Then it seems to drift into some subtle variations before resuming. I guess this is kind of a beat? Personal preferences, top line and kick to cut through a little more. Have you considered adding some kind of rap or lead line to this track? Kind of screams out for it.
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- KVRian
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- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Thanks Wags,
Its Drunken Monkey Style
Its Drunken Monkey Style
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
a tad sub-bass heavy, making the low end muddy. i do like the percussion. lower that bass and the high end will cut through better as well.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Many thanks for listening and advice, had a little listen to Baby Cart/Lone wolf and cub/ Shogun assassin this morning and added a few bits and pieces, plus dropped the bass to around 8 and increased DRM to 10.layzer wrote:a tad sub-bass heavy, making the low end muddy. i do like the percussion. lower that bass and the high end will cut through better as well.
Thanks to both of you for the tips and advice, hope it sounds better
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- addled muppet weed
- 105846 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
your drunken monkey is no match for my wu tang style!
love any old school kung fu reference, so im in!
the updated version, nice piece, could easily imagine someone spittin' rhymes over this. bit of a late night drive through a rainy city feel to it
has an air of nightmares on wax about it, if slightly darker
love any old school kung fu reference, so im in!
the updated version, nice piece, could easily imagine someone spittin' rhymes over this. bit of a late night drive through a rainy city feel to it
has an air of nightmares on wax about it, if slightly darker
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Many thanks,vurt wrote:your drunken monkey is no match for my wu tang style!
love any old school kung fu reference, so im in!
the updated version, nice piece, could easily imagine someone spittin' rhymes over this. bit of a late night drive through a rainy city feel to it
has an air of nightmares on wax about it, if slightly darker
I will use my Shaolin Buddha Finger, I dropped it, oh me and my Buddha fingers
Any comparison to Nightmares on Wax is still dig out the old stuff when I get a chance
This was a hark back to those early days
This
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgioBL8EO_0
And a lot of the early Depth Charge, Mr Kirk etc was my GOTO in my roller disco days
So I've been attempting to imitate using freeware synthesisers instead of samples.
Not sure how successful, but can only try.
Rainy days, I remember them
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Whilst listening to this, I kept seeing images from Guy Ritchie's "Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels" in my mind's eye. I guess that would make this suitable for some sort of OST application.
Good work
Good work
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Thankyouverymuch,seismic1 wrote:Whilst listening to this, I kept seeing images from Guy Ritchie's "Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels" in my mind's eye. I guess that would make this suitable for some sort of OST application.
Good work
Lock, stock is haha,
Barry the Baptist: ****ing northern drunken monkey style
Gary: I hate these ****ing southern fairies!
Can everyone stop gettin' shot?
Some of the text has been changed for further comedic value, it may or may not work
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRAF
- 2587 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Yeah, listening this leads me into a good meditative mood,
especially the repeating "bass-morf" is very prominent.
The last third changes a little - here you break
the meditative flow for a short time.
Nice relaxing groove - good to listen.
Are drunken monkey like this?
especially the repeating "bass-morf" is very prominent.
The last third changes a little - here you break
the meditative flow for a short time.
Nice relaxing groove - good to listen.
Are drunken monkey like this?
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1276 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Thankyouverymuch for listening and commentingenroe wrote:Yeah, listening this leads me into a good meditative mood,
especially the repeating "bass-morf" is very prominent.
The last third changes a little - here you break
the meditative flow for a short time.
Nice relaxing groove - good to listen.
Are drunken monkey like this?
The mediative bit
The drunken monkey style, is me trying to externalise my own feeling and attitude. I sometimes picture myself as a bit loose in terms of what I babble on about and still feel that my balance in life is better than it really is and I'm very proud of my tails, I tells, to you and whoever will listen
Oh, & often I talk gibberish/a lot of bollox, but you may have already noticed that
Plus, I very much likey the old kungfu films
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
- KVRist
- 133 posts since 10 Dec, 2017
If Funk Monkey wasn't taken a million times i would say Drunk Funk Monkey lol.
Good bassline but too repetitive, IMHO. i see you switched it up, but if you tossed them back and forth earlier i wouldn't have grinded my teeth making myself listen to it sorry, no offense, justa lesson i have learned after being called a newb for being too repetitive so many times,.
Strong style you have, i like the control you have but wild sense of tonality.
All in all, i would really enjoy this more if the basslines were swapped back and forth, possibly with a drop every 45 seconds or so, at the end you drop it and i feel you could just copy/paste that into the after-intro and mid-section and make it feel more alive.
Overall great Concept, hope you don't take offense, my suggestions have been praised by a lot of people in Image-Line Forums for doing drops and filter sweeps, so i suggest you do the same. Cheers m8
Good bassline but too repetitive, IMHO. i see you switched it up, but if you tossed them back and forth earlier i wouldn't have grinded my teeth making myself listen to it sorry, no offense, justa lesson i have learned after being called a newb for being too repetitive so many times,.
Strong style you have, i like the control you have but wild sense of tonality.
All in all, i would really enjoy this more if the basslines were swapped back and forth, possibly with a drop every 45 seconds or so, at the end you drop it and i feel you could just copy/paste that into the after-intro and mid-section and make it feel more alive.
Overall great Concept, hope you don't take offense, my suggestions have been praised by a lot of people in Image-Line Forums for doing drops and filter sweeps, so i suggest you do the same. Cheers m8
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- addled muppet weed
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- KVRAF
- 35168 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
It has that late nineties, lazy, ninja tune thing going on. Sounds good.