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janke
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315 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Post Sun Aug 12, 2018 10:20 am


Nubm
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35 posts since 24 Jul, 2018

Re: kristy

Post Sun Aug 12, 2018 12:00 pm

I like your songs very much. They really tell a story in a trippy way that is too bizare or strange to put in words.
For this one, the fade out was a bit disappointing, but thats minor. The song had some problems in the low mids. Your songs often struggle a bit on busier parts. Some carefully applied automation could make a big difference. So those awesome sounds you choosed or designed blend in together better, they often appear just stacked on top of each other.

janke
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315 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Re: kristy

Post Sun Aug 12, 2018 1:11 pm

thanks i realy like that you give tips to do things better:-)

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Bansaw
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339 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: kristy

Post Sun Aug 12, 2018 4:28 pm

I appreciate you put a lot of thought into the piece. That really comes through.
9m20 is too long for me though. Some of the fat needs to be cut out to make it a lean cut.
Good job tho :tu:
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layzer
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5538 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: kristy

Post Sun Aug 12, 2018 9:11 pm

always enjoy your compositions. this was yet another interesting journey,
your recording levels have been much improved since i pointed you to that master limiter.
now i think you need to work on frequency spectrum balance. as you tend to over emphasize
the low end. look into a good spectrum analyzer for this. ;) and shoot for a sight declining
ramp from the low end to the high
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janke
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315 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Re: kristy

Post Mon Aug 13, 2018 7:29 am

thanks gong to check that.....thanks for the help :-)

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