bluetrain

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janke
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318 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Post Wed Aug 15, 2018 1:51 pm


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layzer
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5641 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: bluetrain

Post Wed Aug 15, 2018 3:07 pm

ooo i like the composition, sounds AND mix on this one. whatever you did, keep doing it.
good job :tu:
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Eauson
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837 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: bluetrain

Post Wed Aug 15, 2018 5:04 pm

Couple of little resonant peaks @ the beginning, but this rolls along nicely, after the breakdown it starts to really chug along, would enjoy a longer version :tu: :D
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Bansaw
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362 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: bluetrain

Post Fri Aug 17, 2018 4:30 pm

vocals @1:45 : whose the woman ?
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ChamMusic
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893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006

Re: bluetrain

Post Sat Aug 18, 2018 9:48 am

Overall it works well...production in particular is tight, punchy, but still warm! Love the 'train' rhythm that grows.

One Point: The spoken vocals...I would pull back the delay a little bit to make them more intelligible maybe?

2nd Point: That 'gated' melody towards the end is quite strong but might be even better with an extra 'non-gated' layer to help the tune sing?

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htcnext2
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244 posts since 3 Jul, 2017 from Austria

Re: bluetrain

Post Sat Aug 18, 2018 11:19 am

The vocals in the beginning - Ursula Rucker I guess, sounds like. Nicely done.
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janke
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318 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Re: bluetrain

Post Sun Aug 19, 2018 10:19 am

hi i got voices from smithonian i dont know the name of here

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