Lost In Madness | WIP |
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Hi guys,,
working on some fresh hardcore tune and i was wondering if you have something to say about it;)
Feedback & Tips are allways welcome!
Enjoy (if you can:P)
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/los ... ip/s-LQLdk
working on some fresh hardcore tune and i was wondering if you have something to say about it;)
Feedback & Tips are allways welcome!
Enjoy (if you can:P)
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/los ... ip/s-LQLdk
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- KVRian
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily, could easily accommodate a roar or two. Interesting breakdown and the recovery definitely rocks, maybe could be reduced to get a fuller impact.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
You mean filter out the sound during the build up? or make it less full during the reveal?!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily, could easily accommodate a roar or two. Interesting breakdown and the recovery definitely rocks, maybe could be reduced to get a fuller impact.
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- KVRian
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Yeah, sorry bout that, the snare comes in all solid, maybe have that slightly reduced in vol or filtered. Even heavy breathing typa thing could give an extra dimension instead of snare, these are just things that came to me to allow something to standoutMaartenP wrote:You mean filter out the sound during the build up? or make it less full during the reveal?!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily, could easily accommodate a roar or two. Interesting breakdown and the recovery definitely rocks, maybe could be reduced to get a fuller impact.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Hmm, will look in to that! but i kinda did that because of the big kickdrums that come before that, there has to be some kind of impact on that 3rd bar... but i understand what you mean.Eauson wrote:Yeah, sorry bout that, the snare comes in all solid, maybe have that slightly reduced in vol or filtered. Even heavy breathing typa thing could give an extra dimension instead of snare, these are just things that came to me to allow something to standoutMaartenP wrote:You mean filter out the sound during the build up? or make it less full during the reveal?!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily, could easily accommodate a roar or two. Interesting breakdown and the recovery definitely rocks, maybe could be reduced to get a fuller impact.
thanks for the advice!
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
Agreed...the overall production is well done.Vortifex wrote:That is one solid kick that comes in at 0:53, love it.
If it ever got to the dance floor, they would definitely ask for a remix for use in clubs.Vortifex wrote:I personally felt that the long spoken part during the break doesn't work from a dancefloor perspective
Neighbour's toddler is a f#ckin hardcore demon on the pots and pans...he loved it and took it to new heights with his 'overturned wok' solo! :0) His roar of desperation when his dad finally removed the spoon from his hand fitted in fine as well!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily
It all works very well...I would've liked the kick-ass riff that enters after the break to have come in beforehand and then then maybe build it even more with an extra melodic layer after the break?
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
Agreed...the overall production is well done.Vortifex wrote:That is one solid kick that comes in at 0:53, love it.
If it ever got to the dance floor, they would definitely ask for a remix for use in clubs.Vortifex wrote:I personally felt that the long spoken part during the break doesn't work from a dancefloor perspective
Neighbour's toddler is a f#ckin hardcore demon on the pots and pans...he loved it and took it to new heights with his 'overturned wok' solo! :0) His roar of desperation when his dad finally removed the spoon from his hand fitted in fine as well!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily
It all works very well...I would've liked the kick-ass riff that enters after the break to have come in beforehand and then then maybe build it even more with an extra melodic layer after the break?
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Thanks man! Good to hear! And understand what you mean with the long spoken part, but i dont know if you’re familiair with the genre, but it’s not unusual for hardcore to have breaks like that. And because of the chaotickness of the track, i thought iT was good to have Some breathing room there.Vortifex wrote:That is one solid kick that comes in at 0:53, love it. I personally felt that the long spoken part during the break doesn't work from a dancefloor perspective, I thought that section could be tightened up a little. Overall though a really solid and well-produced track, IMO.
But your Words are apreciated!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Thank you to! The break and drop had a whole make-over. That riff wasn’t there before, i was also thinking about putting that sound and riff in Some blocks before the main break, but i have to look in to that.ChamMusic wrote:Agreed...the overall production is well done.Vortifex wrote:That is one solid kick that comes in at 0:53, love it.
If it ever got to the dance floor, they would definitely ask for a remix for use in clubs.Vortifex wrote:I personally felt that the long spoken part during the break doesn't work from a dancefloor perspective
Neighbour's toddler is a f#ckin hardcore demon on the pots and pans...he loved it and took it to new heights with his 'overturned wok' solo! :0) His roar of desperation when his dad finally removed the spoon from his hand fitted in fine as well!Eauson wrote:My mate Trev the drummer would bang along to this quite merrily
It all works very well...I would've liked the kick-ass riff that enters after the break to have come in beforehand and then then maybe build it even more with an extra melodic layer after the break?
IT’s still a work in progress, so all feedback is taken in to considiration;)
Thnx!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 8
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Well, it certainly has lots of energy and I guess I can imagine people having a good time dancing to it. Musically, it doesn't do much for me but that's just a personal thing and not a reflection on the quality of the production. The mix is decent but I think there is room for improvement. As I'm no mix master, I can't give specifics as to what I'm hearing that can be improved but it's something in the mid range. I can't tell if it's a reverb or EQ problem but the mid just sounds kind of flat. Of course that could just be my 60 year old ears. It is well done though performance wise.
Music - 7
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 8
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Well, it certainly has lots of energy and I guess I can imagine people having a good time dancing to it. Musically, it doesn't do much for me but that's just a personal thing and not a reflection on the quality of the production. The mix is decent but I think there is room for improvement. As I'm no mix master, I can't give specifics as to what I'm hearing that can be improved but it's something in the mid range. I can't tell if it's a reverb or EQ problem but the mid just sounds kind of flat. Of course that could just be my 60 year old ears. It is well done though performance wise.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 252 posts since 8 Dec, 2013 from Groningen
Well thank you!wagtunes wrote:My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 9.5
Mix - 8
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Well, it certainly has lots of energy and I guess I can imagine people having a good time dancing to it. Musically, it doesn't do much for me but that's just a personal thing and not a reflection on the quality of the production. The mix is decent but I think there is room for improvement. As I'm no mix master, I can't give specifics as to what I'm hearing that can be improved but it's something in the mid range. I can't tell if it's a reverb or EQ problem but the mid just sounds kind of flat. Of course that could just be my 60 year old ears. It is well done though performance wise.
Mixing is a returning problem in my productions, it is improving, but far from professional. If i have enough trust in the end product i’ll probably let it mix and master by a proffesional. But i’ll definitly take the 8.25 as a compliment!
Thank you!
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- KVRAF
- 2367 posts since 17 Apr, 2004
Don't really have much to say apart from that I liked this and there's no like button. It's pretty mad.
Voted KVR's resident drunk Robert Smith impersonator (thanks Frantz!)
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