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Karma_tba
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762 posts since 12 Aug, 2004, from Boston, Massachusetts

Postby Karma_tba; Mon Aug 20, 2018 4:02 pm Same December O(+> Cover

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Eauson
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Postby Eauson; Mon Aug 20, 2018 11:06 pm Re: Same December O(+> Cover

I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D
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Karma_tba
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Postby Karma_tba; Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:23 am Re: Same December O(+> Cover

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Eauson
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835 posts since 8 Jan, 2013, from morf

Postby Eauson; Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:29 am Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D

Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.


Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)
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wagtunes
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12920 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Postby wagtunes; Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:51 am Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Eauson wrote:
Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D

Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.


Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)


Famous artists who don't read music.

Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.

So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.
Eauson
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835 posts since 8 Jan, 2013, from morf

Postby Eauson; Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:52 am Re: Same December O(+> Cover

wagtunes wrote:
Eauson wrote:
Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D

Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.


Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)


Famous artists who don't read music.

Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.

So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.


Who call the cop out, quick its the fuzz, let's scram
Yeah, I know Wags, just Larkin, not Kenny, but having a giraffe :D

On a separate note.
Where's OP'ers rating Wags.
- or +? :)
Sorry Karma TBA, messon up your post, I hope that someone, looking at you Wags, will be back with his Café famous system.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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wagtunes
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12920 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Postby wagtunes; Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:51 am Re: Same December O(+> Cover

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 8
Mix - 5

Overall - 6.75

Comments: Mix sounds like you recorded all the instruments, mixed it down to 2 tracks and then put the vocal on top of that. In other words, sounds like it was added after the fact. In addition to that, it's very muddy. Musically it's okay. Reminds me of a more uptempo Lou Reed kind of thing to a disco beat. Definitely an odd combo. But the song has to be remixed. It's just all out of place.

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