Same December O(+> Cover
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- KVRian
- 1277 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc
This is just an opinion as I am not a musician.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc
This is just an opinion as I am not a musician.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRian
- 1277 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.Karma_tba wrote:Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc
This is just an opinion as I am not a musician.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Famous artists who don't read music.Eauson wrote:Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.Karma_tba wrote:Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc
This is just an opinion as I am not a musician.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment
Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.
So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.
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- KVRian
- 1277 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Who call the cop out, quick its the fuzz, let's scramwagtunes wrote:Famous artists who don't read music.Eauson wrote:Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.Karma_tba wrote:Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc
This is just an opinion as I am not a musician.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment
Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.
So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.
Yeah, I know Wags, just Larkin, not Kenny, but having a giraffe
On a separate note.
Where's OP'ers rating Wags.
- or +?
Sorry Karma TBA, messon up your post, I hope that someone, looking at you Wags, will be back with his Café famous system.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 8
Mix - 5
Overall - 6.75
Comments: Mix sounds like you recorded all the instruments, mixed it down to 2 tracks and then put the vocal on top of that. In other words, sounds like it was added after the fact. In addition to that, it's very muddy. Musically it's okay. Reminds me of a more uptempo Lou Reed kind of thing to a disco beat. Definitely an odd combo. But the song has to be remixed. It's just all out of place.
Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 8
Mix - 5
Overall - 6.75
Comments: Mix sounds like you recorded all the instruments, mixed it down to 2 tracks and then put the vocal on top of that. In other words, sounds like it was added after the fact. In addition to that, it's very muddy. Musically it's okay. Reminds me of a more uptempo Lou Reed kind of thing to a disco beat. Definitely an odd combo. But the song has to be remixed. It's just all out of place.
