Same December O(+> Cover

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Karma_tba
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791 posts since 12 Aug, 2004 from Boston, Massachusetts

Post Mon Aug 20, 2018 4:02 pm

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Eauson
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837 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Mon Aug 20, 2018 11:06 pm

I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face

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Karma_tba
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791 posts since 12 Aug, 2004 from Boston, Massachusetts

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:23 am

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Eauson
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837 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:29 am

Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D
Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.
Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face

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wagtunes
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13623 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Tue Aug 21, 2018 3:51 am

Eauson wrote:
Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D
Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.
Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)
Famous artists who don't read music.

Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.

So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.

Eauson
KVRian
837 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:52 am

wagtunes wrote:
Eauson wrote:
Karma_tba wrote:
Eauson wrote:I like what this could be, the overwhelming thing is your voice dominating the piece, timing of vocal is a bit miss timed, need editing for placement and a good mix to sit with the rest of the instrumentation, remember, your voice although saying the words is another instrument and you seem to guitar soloing all over the track with your voice.
This distracted me from the rest of the piece, so I can't really comment on drums, geetars etc

This is just an opinion as I am not a musician. :D
Thanks for the listen and input...not sure why you felt you needed to qualify your comments with the disclaimer about not being a musician.
Sorry, my idiotic "I'm not a" comment, I dont play or understand music notation which to me is musician, also I was playing on the, disclaimer,I offer legal advice, but I'm not a lawyer.
I was attempting humour, however you are the second person to pick me up on this, so I'm not gonna chance a third time moment :)
Famous artists who don't read music.

Elvis Presley.
Michael Jackson.
Eric Clapton.
The Beatles.
Eddie Van Halen.
Robert Johnson.

So please. Stop with the "I'm not a musician" comments because you can't read music. It's just a cop out. You're as much a musician as anyone here.
Who call the cop out, quick its the fuzz, let's scram
Yeah, I know Wags, just Larkin, not Kenny, but having a giraffe :D

On a separate note.
Where's OP'ers rating Wags.
- or +? :)
Sorry Karma TBA, messon up your post, I hope that someone, looking at you Wags, will be back with his Café famous system.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13623 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Same December O(+> Cover

Post Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:51 am

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 8
Mix - 5

Overall - 6.75

Comments: Mix sounds like you recorded all the instruments, mixed it down to 2 tracks and then put the vocal on top of that. In other words, sounds like it was added after the fact. In addition to that, it's very muddy. Musically it's okay. Reminds me of a more uptempo Lou Reed kind of thing to a disco beat. Definitely an odd combo. But the song has to be remixed. It's just all out of place.

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