broken lovelytheband remix

[lil big Dillon]

looking for any and all feedback. thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/b ... band-remix

[wagtunes]

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 6

Overall - 6.75

Comments: I'm not sure how I feel about this one. It's probably a taste thing. I'm referring to the mix. Something about it doesn't sound right. Too much distortion? Too loud? Too dense? I don't know. It sounds like 10 pounds of ham shoved into a 5 pound can. Musically it's okay. The vocals are almost impossible to understand in parts. The abrupt ending also doesn't work for me. It just dies there. I don't know. Maybe somebody else can get into more technical stuff and maybe explain to me why I'm not really loving what I'm hearing. Piece just left me cold.

[el-bo (formerly ebow)]

Really like the song. It's got a built-in Glastonbury, sing-along chorus.

Can't really comment on the mix at the moment, but I do like the production aesthetic (will see if that changes when I can listen properly).

And I quite appreciate a song knowing when it's done