PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

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PI CRIMSON
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4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018

Post Sat Sep 15, 2018 2:27 pm


fastlanephil
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586 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sat Sep 15, 2018 4:50 pm

It sounds pretty good to me. It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest but perhaps it’s actually fine for that genre.

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layzer
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5546 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sun Sep 16, 2018 12:27 am

fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in... :shrug:

BUT...... mix is good :tu:
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ATS
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5833 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sun Sep 16, 2018 12:38 am

I liked it. :) I didn't hit it and quit it!
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PI CRIMSON
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4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sun Sep 16, 2018 3:41 am

layzer wrote:
fastlanephil wrote:It sort of stays close to that same motif all the way through but does vary some. Maybe a little more development to maintain interest
nah, you are right, Phil. sounds are generic, its repetitive and boring.
the annoying filtering used throughout sounds like an old ruined cassette left out on a dashboard in the hot sun.
i quit half way in... :shrug:

BUT...... mix is good :tu:
Thanks for your feedback. You're right, I have to make it sound more interesting and I'll consider that for my new songs!

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wagtunes
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13425 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sun Sep 16, 2018 3:47 am

My Feedback

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 8.5

Comments: Foundation is fine but needs more variance. Mix is good.

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ChamMusic
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887 posts since 12 Jun, 2006 from Birmingham, UK

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:10 am

Some great ideas in there -nice melodic touches, but it does all need developing further.

Mix is generally OK if a little bit bright and edgy at times?

filtering effect is quite annoying after a while...you have to remember with such ideas that restraint is everything! :0)
Mark Taylor
Chameleon Music

PI CRIMSON
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4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018

Re: PI CRIMSON - DISCONNECT (Future Bass, Melodic House) Feedback?

Post Sat Sep 22, 2018 6:35 am

https://soundcloud.com/picrimson/pi-crimson-disconnect

I improved the song. Thanks for your feedback, it helped me a lot!

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