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Mikelo
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Postby Mikelo; Sun Sep 16, 2018 5:51 am Michael Borealiz -Please Stay - Rock

Hi all,
this is a demo Im working on...
No mixing of such as yet.
Vocalist will be added later.
All comments welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/michael-busuttil ... tay-c-2018
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ChamMusic
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Postby ChamMusic; Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:02 am Re: Michael Borealiz -Please Stay - Rock

It works...very 1980s 'guitar' tone you've got there.

Without the vocals and any mixing it's hard to comment much further.

The only thing I will say, was there wasn't that much of a 'lift' during the choruses...maybe the vocals will add that?

A solo section would obviously fit well somewhere?
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Mikelo
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Postby Mikelo; Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:07 am Re: Michael Borealiz -Please Stay - Rock

ChamMusic wrote:It works...very 1980s 'guitar' tone you've got there.

Without the vocals and any mixing it's hard to comment much further.

The only thing I will say, was there wasn't that much of a 'lift' during the choruses...maybe the vocals will add that?

A solo section would obviously fit well somewhere?


Hi thanks for the feedback..
Yes it does have a 80s feel, which is intended.
As for the chorus, yes you are correct, its intended space for my vocalist.
Lol for the solo,I personally dont think it needs it but its worth a thought.

Big thanks again for taking your time.
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Postby Mikelo; Fri Sep 21, 2018 9:07 am Re: Michael Borealiz -Please Stay - Rock

Anymore comments or suggestions welcome
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