New bouncy House-Song, Feedback appreciated!

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PI CRIMSON
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4 posts since 15 Sep, 2018

Post Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:23 am

Last edited by PI CRIMSON on Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:06 am, edited 1 time in total.

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wagtunes
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13997 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: New bouncy EDM-Song: PI CRIMSON - TOKYO TROUBLE, Feedback appreciated!

Post Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:52 am

My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 6
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5.25

Comments: The stuttering was annoying. The vocals are too low. Need to be brought up more. Musically, there isn't much too it. It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements. The main synth is too loud and dry. Needs more air (EQ). On the plus side, I've heard worse.

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layzer
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5755 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: New bouncy EDM-Song: PI CRIMSON - TOKYO TROUBLE, Feedback appreciated!

Post Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:35 pm

wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:52 am
It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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wagtunes
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13997 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: New bouncy EDM-Song: PI CRIMSON - TOKYO TROUBLE, Feedback appreciated!

Post Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:55 pm

layzer wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:35 pm
wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:52 am
It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be. :lol:

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layzer
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5755 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: New bouncy EDM-Song: PI CRIMSON - TOKYO TROUBLE, Feedback appreciated!

Post Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:03 am

wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:55 pm
layzer wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:35 pm
wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:52 am
It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be. :lol:
should be an easy enough CD project to write up a dozen 7 second motifs and stretch them each to about 5 minutes long! :hihi:
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13997 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: New bouncy EDM-Song: PI CRIMSON - TOKYO TROUBLE, Feedback appreciated!

Post Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:05 am

layzer wrote:
Thu Oct 11, 2018 2:03 am
wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:55 pm
layzer wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 6:35 pm
wagtunes wrote:
Wed Oct 10, 2018 11:52 am
It's basically the same motif over and over with subtle variations in the arrangements.

yeah, this should have been a 7 second song
Hey Layzer, did you hear. I'm going to be doing my first Trance CD. Taking bets on how big a disaster it's going to be. :lol:
should be an easy enough CD project to write up a dozen 7 second motifs and stretch them each to about 5 minutes long! :hihi:
Well, I'm going to try to be a little more creative than that, but yeah, I do get what you mean after listening to a bunch of these.

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