Vanity Divinorum

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BrainClaim
KVRist
225 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Thu Oct 18, 2018 2:05 pm

This track is about shaman who dives into a happy trip on ayahuasca but ends up with his mind snapping, I hope You enjoy the song, it is not exactly dark ambient, nor it is exactly pure ambient music. I would love to hear your opinions, I hope you enjoy!

SC link:
https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/vanity-divinorum

YT link with winamp visualizations:
https://youtu.be/WzKwG0v-qvw

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layzer
KVRAF
5734 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Vanity Divinorum

Post Thu Oct 18, 2018 5:08 pm

i liked it, sounds good except for those plopping sounds came in kinda loud and remained too loud IMHO. cool drums and vocal fx.
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wagtunes
KVRAF
13918 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Vanity Divinorum

Post Thu Oct 18, 2018 6:26 pm

My Feedback

Music - 4
Instruments - 6
Performance - 7
Mix - 3

Overall - 5

Comments: Agree with Layzer. Pops are WAY to loud. Percussion is muddy. Music part is barely audible. Piece needs some major EQ, level adjustments, or something. Mix is not at all pleasant to listen to. Musically, I guess this is minimalist to some extent. Actually a cross between that and ethnic. Maybe minimalist ethnic. Not sure. Either way, very static. Sounds like the same thing over and over with just slight variations until that loud horn or whatever it is comes in towards the end, also too loud. I think I'll stop there.

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