As Far as the Eye Can See(Five part electronic piece)

[Esgalachoir]

I'm struggling with this piece. Since it's so big, there's a ton of little stuff to be fixed(Volume, frequency balance, harmonic highlights, timing issues, a few erroneous sounds, breaking up the kickdrum...goes on and on).
It's also got incoming vocal parts that I'm just not sure how to approach logistically. I know how I want them to sound in the end, but I'm not sure which path to take.
The "drop" which occurs at around 9:20 also feels like it suffers from serious problems.

https://soundcloud.com/esgalachoir/as-f ... ye-can-see