Gloomy indie song that's too long for contest

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Matthewrymarz
KVRer
24 posts since 14 Jun, 2016

Post Sun Nov 18, 2018 12:58 pm

https://soundcloud.com/rimraz/wasted-on ... re/s-RdNbK

What do you think? What genre would you classify this as? My best guess is electronic gloom indie pop. I'm mainly looking for honest feedback on mixing, mastering, composition, etc. I'll return it when I get the chance.

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Bansaw
KVRist
389 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Gloomy indie song that's too long for contest

Post Sun Nov 18, 2018 4:14 pm

Change a few appropriate sounds here and there and it could be a good Retro piece.
I feel the vocals are too busy - there needs to be more rest between lines to give the listener a rest to take the lyrics in imho. e.g. from 0:47 to 1:21, the vocals are constant.
Otherwise, good, I like it.

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