L.R.C.

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Karma_tba
KVRian
793 posts since 12 Aug, 2004 from Boston, Massachusetts

Post Mon Dec 03, 2018 4:01 pm


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Saffran
KVRist
74 posts since 20 Oct, 2018

Re: L.R.C.

Post Mon Dec 03, 2018 8:13 pm

Sorry to say, but you have made it public to soon. It isn't ready.
And why do i say that?
First is your singing. It sounds nervous and insecure. You have proven that you can do better.
Second is the instrumental performance. There's lot of misses in there.
Third is the mixing. Lots of misses there too.
Come on you can do better!

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bmanic
KVRAF
8110 posts since 3 Feb, 2003 from Finland, Espoo

Re: L.R.C.

Post Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:45 pm

I have to agree. The above comment made me check your other songs and this one is definitely not at the same level yet.

I can however hear a really nice interpretation of the song there! Thanks for posting!

EDIT: I actually had to sit down and really think about why I like your interpretation of Little Red Corvette and I think it comes down to the choice of the tempo. Somehow you've absolutely _nailed_ the tempo. It's right at the threshold of "too slow", right smack in the perfect laid back tempo point. :D

Cheers!
bM
"Wisdom is wisdom, regardless of the idiot who said it." -an idiot

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Karma_tba
KVRian
793 posts since 12 Aug, 2004 from Boston, Massachusetts

Re: L.R.C.

Post Tue Dec 04, 2018 10:12 am

Thanks for a constructive and honest assessment … I agree that this effort was half-baked. Saffran and bmaniac you are very much appreciated for taking the time to encourage me to do better.

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