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Karma_tba
KVRian
830 posts since 12 Aug, 2004 from Boston, Massachusetts

Post Tue Feb 26, 2019 9:32 am

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wagtunes
KVRAF
14843 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: 4Ever - A Tale of dysfunctional love

Post Thu Feb 28, 2019 4:35 am

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7.5
Performance - 5
Mix - 7.5

Overall - 6.75

Comments: Not one comment? That sucks. I know the feeling. Anyway, here it is straight. Music is too soft. In fact, whole recording is too soft. But vocals too loud for level of the music. Not really into rap/hip hop. But song just drags. Maybe it's the tempo. I don't know. It just sounds like it's on its last legs and ready to keel over. The music, in parts, is nice if not generic sounding. Arrangement needs more variety, especially for a 5 minute track. The last chorus is way too long. I don't know. There's just no excitement here on any level. It's like a pancake with no butter, no syrup, and sitting on the table for an hour ice cold. Ironically, it's a hell of a lot better than some of the loops I've been listening to of late. This at least shows effort. It just needs a shot of adrenaline or something.

nasenmann
KVRian
657 posts since 24 Oct, 2005

Re: deleted

Post Thu Feb 28, 2019 6:47 pm

that sucks...woulda liked to respond.

just mentioning that OP was here 10 years (!!!!) B4 1st commentator..

i want to highlight the ß, which does not exist in english language.

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