Minimalistic and jazzy ASMR indiepop - would love some feedback!

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JurassicJakob
KVRer
22 posts since 21 Nov, 2013 from Sweden

Post Fri Mar 01, 2019 6:21 am

Dear people of KVR.

I would love for you to lend me your ears and tell me what you think of my latest track. It is sort of an intimate and minimalistic bed time poem - as if Fly Me To The Moon and Blackbird had a mellow saxophone-playing love-child.

In your most honest opinions, what do you think could make the song/arrangement/production/better?

https://soundcloud.com/karljakob/apple-tree

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layzer
KVRAF
6374 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Minimalistic and jazzy ASMR indiepop - would love some feedback!

Post Fri Mar 01, 2019 4:25 pm

good singing, well composed, imho the composition experts may find issues tho :hihi:

productionwise i found it a little hot for a chill tune. engineered more like a EBM floor killer track.
only say this because i hear some harmonic distortion on the vox at times from pushing the signal too hard, or maybe its intentional..either way it sounds muffly.
but take this opinion from a cranky, old man stuck in the 80's
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elassi
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2143 posts since 8 Sep, 2009

Re: Minimalistic and jazzy ASMR indiepop - would love some feedback!

Post Fri Mar 01, 2019 4:41 pm

Dig your voice, it 'speaks' to me.

Don't like your appearence on KVR, though. Always prefer people that contribute to the community rather than just spreading their tunes because it is possible - and otherwise tell things nobody's interested in (yes, I've checked your archive).

So, no love from my side but a negative feeling.

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