[HIP HOP] One of these dayz

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LDKitz
KVRist
72 posts since 22 Jul, 2017

Post Mon Mar 11, 2019 2:14 pm

Let's hope to get as much love as i got last time :hihi:
In all seriousness , been working on this one for some time , couldn't get the mix right.
The snare is what rly kept me busy , snaps like hell ,especially during the verse.
Anyway this is what i got.

https://soundcloud.com/ldkitz/one-of-these-dayz

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wagtunes
KVRAF
14819 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: [HIP HOP] One of these dayz

Post Thu Mar 14, 2019 10:38 am

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5

Overall - 7.75

Comments: I know what it's like to be ignored so I figured I'd comment on this one. Mix is pretty decent. Snare sounds okay to me. Song itself just needs more variety. It sounds like a loop without much else going on. Fortunately, it's not too long so that helps. I'm just not into this whole "Play the same thing for 2 minutes and call it a song" stuff.

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el-bo (formerly ebow)
KVRAF
11085 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away

Re: [HIP HOP] One of these dayz

Post Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:04 am

Nice ol' skool vibe to it. Hopefully you find someone who can rap to it with a bit of a soulful edge :tu:

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telecode
KVRist
337 posts since 24 Mar, 2015 from Toronto, Canada

Re: [HIP HOP] One of these dayz

Post Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:13 am

Cool. Old.skule!!!
Just a keep on a goin' a forward, without a single ounce of fear
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LDKitz
KVRist
72 posts since 22 Jul, 2017

Re: [HIP HOP] One of these dayz

Post Fri Mar 15, 2019 2:20 am

thanks for the feedback.

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