[House] tm-My-New-Shoes

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mindstuff
KVRer
18 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Wed Mar 20, 2019 2:14 pm


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layzer
KVRAF
6527 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Wed Mar 20, 2019 3:11 pm

welcome to KVR MC. nice shoes. :tu:
kind of ho hum musically... that lead synth @1:07 reminded me of a whiney old GF i used to have.
production sounds ok, it kind of has that hollow smiling freq spectrum curve
where the mids are too quiet. change up the bassline a little next time ;)
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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wagtunes
KVRAF
15198 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Wed Mar 20, 2019 4:54 pm

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 6.5

Overall - 7

Comments: Dull mix. Musically stagnant aside from totally annoying lead. Not the worst thing I've ever heard but needs a lot of work to liven it up.

mindstuff
KVRer
18 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Wed Mar 20, 2019 5:37 pm

layzer wrote:
Wed Mar 20, 2019 3:11 pm
that lead synth @1:07 reminded me of a whiney old GF i used to have.
:D

mindstuff
KVRer
18 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Wed Mar 20, 2019 5:39 pm

wagtunes wrote:
Wed Mar 20, 2019 4:54 pm
My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 6.5

Overall - 7

Comments: Dull mix. Musically stagnant aside from totally annoying lead. Not the worst thing I've ever heard but needs a lot of work to liven it up.
Thanks for the review!

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Bansaw
KVRian
512 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Thu Mar 21, 2019 4:12 pm

@0:50 build up didn't seem quite convincing, and the "drop" just after it wasn't either.
Maybe put a bar of silence in after the build. There are loads of tips on Youtube on how to build & drop.
First 30 seconds for me were the most enjoyable; liked the vibe. Thats a good foundation to build on.

mindstuff
KVRer
18 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [House] tm-My-New-Shoes

Post Fri Mar 22, 2019 9:00 am

Bansaw wrote:
Thu Mar 21, 2019 4:12 pm
@0:50 build up didn't seem quite convincing, and the "drop" just after it wasn't either.
Maybe put a bar of silence in after the build. There are loads of tips on Youtube on how to build & drop.
First 30 seconds for me were the most enjoyable; liked the vibe. Thats a good foundation to build on.
Great advice. ty

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