[Electronic] tm-Element

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mindstuff
KVRist
44 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Thu Apr 25, 2019 8:56 am


sjm
KVRAF
1844 posts since 17 Apr, 2004

Re: [Electronic] tm-Element

Post Fri Apr 26, 2019 6:37 am

My big suggestion would be: add some rests to your lead. It's lacking the movement of the other sustained sounds and as such needs something else to shake it up a bit. It's overbearing right now IMO, smudging the overall sound of the track. Not adding any kind of rhythmic variation means it's making the music sound more static than it should.
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mindstuff
KVRist
44 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Element

Post Fri Apr 26, 2019 9:06 am

sjm wrote:
Fri Apr 26, 2019 6:37 am
My big suggestion would be: add some rests to your lead. It's lacking the movement of the other sustained sounds and as such needs something else to shake it up a bit. It's overbearing right now IMO, smudging the overall sound of the track. Not adding any kind of rhythmic variation means it's making the music sound more static than it should.
Ty. Great suggestion. :tu:

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