[Electronic] tm-Puzzle

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mindstuff
KVRist
58 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Fri Jun 07, 2019 7:50 am

New track to kick off the weekend. Turn it up! Thanks for the listen :tu:

https://soundcloud.com/user-117743396/puzzle

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Sound Together
KVRer
7 posts since 7 Jun, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Fri Jun 07, 2019 10:47 am

I listened to your mix 3-4 times and it's really well balanced. The composition is great too! In my opinion a light boost in the 400Hz range will bring back a little body and depth. Let me know when you release a new sound I'll listen with pleasure !
NOT INSTANT MASTERING
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wagtunes
KVRAF
15783 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Fri Jun 07, 2019 12:25 pm

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.625

Comments: Agree with the above poster. Low mid's a little thin in places. Other than that, cool sound. Nice mysterious vibe on this one. Sounds like Dalek music. lol

mindstuff
KVRist
58 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Fri Jun 07, 2019 1:05 pm

Sound Together wrote:
Fri Jun 07, 2019 10:47 am
In my opinion a light boost in the 400Hz range will bring back a little body and depth.
:tu:

mindstuff
KVRist
58 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Fri Jun 07, 2019 1:08 pm

wagtunes wrote:
Fri Jun 07, 2019 12:25 pm
My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.625

Comments: Agree with the above poster. Low mid's a little thin in places. Other than that, cool sound. Nice mysterious vibe on this one. Sounds like Dalek music. lol
Thanks for the feedback wagtunes :). :phones:

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Bansaw
KVRian
569 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Sat Jun 08, 2019 6:29 am

I think its good, kind of a mild dubstep!
I enjoyed it up until 1:32 and was intrigued as to what you'd do next. But you just basically repeated the idea of the first part of the song, didn't add much to it in terms of horizontal or vertical development. The key to a great piece of music is having the right amount of familiarity to make the listener feel at home and comfortable, but the right amount of interest and uniqueness development to keep them intrigued for the duration of the song.

mindstuff
KVRist
58 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Sun Jun 09, 2019 7:26 pm

Bansaw wrote:
Sat Jun 08, 2019 6:29 am
I think its good, kind of a mild dubstep!
I enjoyed it up until 1:32 and was intrigued as to what you'd do next. But you just basically repeated the idea of the first part of the song, didn't add much to it in terms of horizontal or vertical development. The key to a great piece of music is having the right amount of familiarity to make the listener feel at home and comfortable, but the right amount of interest and uniqueness development to keep them intrigued for the duration of the song.
Great advice...working on this concept in my next track...something I def missed here.

Unreflected
KVRist
106 posts since 13 Jun, 2015

Re: [Electronic] tm-Puzzle

Post Sun Jun 09, 2019 7:32 pm

I enjoyed from start to end.
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