The Rite of Drums

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BrainClaim
KVRist
236 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Mon Jun 10, 2019 10:42 am

This is probably the first Dark Ambient Ritual Techno I have ever made, I hope you like it, any feedback will be appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/the-rite-of-drums

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wagtunes
KVRAF
15896 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: The Rite of Drums

Post Mon Jun 10, 2019 11:22 am

My Feedback

Music - 7
Instruments - 7.5
Performance - 7
Mix - 8

Overall - 7.25

Comments: Like the vocals at the intro even if they are a little over the top. However, mix can use a little EQ in the mids. Little mud on the bass. The transition from vocal to the next part seems kind of abrupt and I don't feel the two parts really go together. Musically, the piece seems to be all over the place without anything really standing out, outside of the intro. Of course I'm not really into Dark Techno, so take these comments with a very tiny grain of salt. Mix itself is kind of uneven. It's like multiple songs have been combined all with different atmospheres. All in all, doesn't really work for me. And of course cut off ending doesn't help.

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