[Electronic] tm-Drowning

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mindstuff
KVRist
73 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Thu Jun 20, 2019 10:20 pm


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wagtunes
KVRAF
16141 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: [Electronic] tm-Drowning

Post Fri Jun 21, 2019 1:17 pm

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Music - 8
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 8.375

Comments: Intro and what comes after it don't seem to go together at all. I feel a huge disconnect between the two. Eventually we return back and mix it up but the initial transition is a little jarring. Musically, kind of odd. Don't really know what to make of this one. At least it wasn't boring.

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Bansaw
KVRian
619 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: [Electronic] tm-Drowning

Post Sat Jun 22, 2019 8:52 am

I was really intrigued by the intro, the water sounds, the interesting arp, then a completely different song emerged. If it was me I'd go back to the intro and really expand that and make that into a song just by itself.

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Mozex
KVRist
98 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Drowning

Post Sat Jun 22, 2019 11:56 pm

I like it. Sounds pretty good to me.
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Skyfall72
KVRist
36 posts since 14 Apr, 2019

Re: [Electronic] tm-Drowning

Post Tue Jun 25, 2019 10:14 am

Sound and mood is there but the rest needs more work. I think the tempo needs to be adjusted.

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