Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Share your music, collaborate, and partake in monthly music contests.
User avatar
Mozex
KVRist
98 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Post Sun Jun 23, 2019 11:53 am

Another track I made but I do not know the genre:

https://soundcloud.com/mo7ex/doomsday
-What is that? Music?
-No its a chicken noodle.

User avatar
wagtunes
KVRAF
16141 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Sun Jun 23, 2019 12:54 pm

My Feedback

Music - 6
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 7.875

Comments: At the 30 second mark, some kind of melody should have come in, not just additional harmony, arrangement, whatever. Basically, this is a backing track in desperate need of some kind of a top line. Of course I understand that most songs in this genre (EDM) are like this. But even then, they have something that at least makes them fairly interesting. It does help that you mix up the arrangement a little. But the lack of melody makes this just another track lost in the air. Even harmonically it appears to be only 2 chords. There is no real payoff and the end leaves me disappointed. Sounds like an excerpt from a longer track. The mix is fine. The instruments sound cool. The performance isn't flashy but at least it's adequate. But the music is just boring. Pretty package with very little inside. If I'm not mistaken, I think I might have made a similar comment on another track of yours.

For a future track, try to write some kind of top line. I think you'll find that it will take your track to a whole new level.

User avatar
Mozex
KVRist
98 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Sun Jun 23, 2019 9:12 pm

Thx for the feedback< Yes the songs on this album are a bit like that, but the songs I make now have more lead. But thank you very much for your time to listen to it!
I dont remember you making such comment on a track of mine to be honest, but its possible.
-What is that? Music?
-No its a chicken noodle.

smd12
KVRist
189 posts since 25 Jan, 2010

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Mon Jun 24, 2019 3:25 pm

I like it. I don't think it is boring at all. :tu:

fastlanephil
KVRian
776 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Mon Jun 24, 2019 3:27 pm

Zzzzzzzz.....

Skyfall72
KVRist
36 posts since 14 Apr, 2019

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Tue Jun 25, 2019 10:32 am

Love the sound palette but don’t love the arrangement , need more parts and punch line.
The long delay on the synth melody is distracting and the whole mix sounds zzz.

Sorry if I’m being too honest lol.
Great job tho.

User avatar
Frantz
KVRAF
5096 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Tue Jun 25, 2019 5:21 pm

I agree with wagtunes. Cool sounds. Great mix. It sounds like a solid back tracking track. A top line synth melody or vocals would take this to the next level.

User avatar
Mozex
KVRist
98 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Tue Jun 25, 2019 9:35 pm

Thx all for the feedback and time to listen!
-What is that? Music?
-No its a chicken noodle.

mindstuff
KVRist
73 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: Doomsday (genre uknown to me)

Post Wed Jun 26, 2019 1:35 pm

Like the groove...Sound design is a bit better on this one than one of your other tracks I listened to.

Return to “Music Cafe”