Forum Narcissus

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Karma_tba
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Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:23 pm

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toonertik
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1506 posts since 15 Feb, 2017 from a worn out vinyl groove

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:30 pm

:tu:
but only one?... :lol:

damm... I sometimes wish I could suck my own...
so I guess this song ain't 'bout me? >>> ;)

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Karma_tba
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966 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:42 pm

toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:30 pm
:tu:
but only one?... :lol:

damm... I sometimes wish I could suck my own...
so I guess this song ain't 'bout me? >>> ;)
No not you.... I'd give you a clue but I don't wanna be banned. :lol:

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wagtunes
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16141 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:49 pm

My Feedback

Music - 6
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 5

Overall - 6.25

Comments: When I saw the title, I just couldn't resist. Had to give this a listen. Anyway, had trouble getting all the lyrics. Vocal needs to be brought up a db or so and maybe a little bit of the low end high passed as it's a bit on the muddy side. Would have also liked a little more lyric development as there's a lot of repetition. I think there's a lot more you could have done with this. Musically, it's a bit stagnant. Some additional sounds sprinkled throughout might have made it musically more interesting. The performance is competent if not flashy. Again, however, it's kind of the same throughout. Sounds like a loop copied and pasted throughout. The overall mix could probably be brightened up a bit. But mostly the vocal is just too buried in the mix. Fix that and it's a hundred percent better.

I get that you probably did this as a joke and out of a great deal of anger as well. I hope it brought you some peace and comfort or whatever it is you were looking for in doing this.

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wagtunes
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16141 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:50 pm

Karma_tba wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:42 pm
toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:30 pm
:tu:
but only one?... :lol:

damm... I sometimes wish I could suck my own...
so I guess this song ain't 'bout me? >>> ;)
No not you.... I'd give you a clue but I don't wanna be banned. :lol:
It's okay my friend. We all know it's about me.

Or does believing that ironically make me the narcissist you're saying that I am?

Now THAT is some irony for you. :lol:

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Karma_tba
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966 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:00 pm

wagtunes wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:50 pm
Karma_tba wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:42 pm
toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:30 pm
:tu:
but only one?... :lol:

damm... I sometimes wish I could suck my own...
so I guess this song ain't 'bout me? >>> ;)
No not you.... I'd give you a clue but I don't wanna be banned. :lol:
It's okay my friend. We all know it's about me.

Or does believing that ironically make me the narcissist you're saying that I am?

Now THAT is some irony for you. :lol:
"You're so vain...bet you think this song is about you...don't you?"

AnX
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4903 posts since 17 Nov, 2015

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:03 pm

BONES

ghettosynth
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12044 posts since 13 Oct, 2009

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:07 pm

I, for one, like it!

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wagtunes
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16141 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:09 pm

Karma_tba wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:00 pm
wagtunes wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:50 pm
Karma_tba wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:42 pm
toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 12:30 pm
:tu:
but only one?... :lol:

damm... I sometimes wish I could suck my own...
so I guess this song ain't 'bout me? >>> ;)
No not you.... I'd give you a clue but I don't wanna be banned. :lol:
It's okay my friend. We all know it's about me.

Or does believing that ironically make me the narcissist you're saying that I am?

Now THAT is some irony for you. :lol:
"You're so vain...bet you think this song is about you...don't you?"
Well, if I'm wrong then my day is made.

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toonertik
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1506 posts since 15 Feb, 2017 from a worn out vinyl groove

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:13 pm

Karma_tba wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:00 pm

"You're so vain...bet you think this song is about you...don't you?"
yeah.. that was my reference ;)

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Karma_tba
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966 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:33 pm

AnX wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:03 pm
BONES
"Spock....I'm a doctor not an EDM producer"!! :hihi:

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toonertik
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1506 posts since 15 Feb, 2017 from a worn out vinyl groove

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:35 pm

Statistics can be interesting.
At this point in time this thread has 125 views and only 19 listens, as reported by soundcloud. Oh and 10 comments.
So, I am curious about the lurkers who pop in, don't listen and for sure keep quiet...
nosy ole so and sos... :P

BTW, Karma_tba... is that Karma_ToBeAnnonced? :shrug:

chk071
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20836 posts since 11 Apr, 2010 from Germany

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:38 pm

toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:35 pm
So, I am curious about the lurkers who pop in, don't listen and for sure keep quiet...
That's gotta be me then... :P

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toonertik
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1506 posts since 15 Feb, 2017 from a worn out vinyl groove

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:42 pm

chk071 wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:38 pm
toonertik wrote:
Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:35 pm
So, I am curious about the lurkers who pop in, don't listen and for sure keep quiet...
That's gotta be me then... :P
lurk>> yup...
don;t listen>> yes...
Keep quiet.... hahahah NO! :P

chk071
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20836 posts since 11 Apr, 2010 from Germany

Re: Forum Narcissus

Post Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:43 pm

Well.. i would have, if you hadn't called me out. :D

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