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janke
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391 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Post Tue Aug 20, 2019 3:10 pm

Last edited by janke on Wed Aug 21, 2019 12:25 am, edited 1 time in total.

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rotku60
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66 posts since 31 May, 2004 from Columbus, Oh

Post Tue Aug 20, 2019 4:11 pm

Really nice . I like the way you kept changing texture to keep interest through the 5+ minutes. The mix sounds pretty solid with some panning touches. Overall not a lot of top end so it sounds just a bit dulled.

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ecamburn
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468 posts since 16 Dec, 2003

Post Wed Aug 21, 2019 5:33 am

I liked this. It had a delicate, floating feeling. I share @rotku60's observations about the mix. It sounded a bit dull to me too. Also, the voice parts were really quiet. I think bringing them up in the mix more could add interest.

janke
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391 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Post Wed Aug 21, 2019 9:09 am

thanks ok bring voices up ,you say its dull what means by thath kind of boring?

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rotku60
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66 posts since 31 May, 2004 from Columbus, Oh

Post Wed Aug 21, 2019 9:58 am

janke wrote:
Wed Aug 21, 2019 9:09 am
thanks ok bring voices up ,you say its dull what means by thath kind of boring?
No not boring, it means lacking some higher frequencies.

janke
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391 posts since 27 Aug, 2008

Post Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:55 am

ok thanks yes i remake it abit and higher voices and freqencies :-)thanks for the tips

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jethrobull
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2098 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Post Wed Aug 21, 2019 11:07 am

Really enjoyed this. Lovely choice of sounds, nice movement throughout. Great work! :tu:
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