My new techno tracks, tell me what you think !

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adrizoto
KVRer
1 posts since 29 Aug, 2019

Post Thu Aug 29, 2019 3:27 pm

Hi guys, I'm new around here. I just made 3 techno songs, and I would really appreciate some feedback on it ! You can listen to it here :

https://soundcloud.com/lavirgule/la-virgule-der-panzer
https://soundcloud.com/lavirgule/la-virgule-vin-rouge
https://soundcloud.com/lavirgule/la-virgule-dunakeszi

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wagtunes
KVRAF
16930 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: My new techno tracks, tell me what you think !

Post Thu Aug 29, 2019 5:34 pm

I listened to the first track. Well, started to. The kick is WAY too loud and whatever you've got going on musically is WAY too soft. After 2 minutes of the same loop over and over, I turned it off. I don't know what comes after but took way too long to get going, at least for me.

Aside from that, post 1 track at a time. Nobody is going to spend 21 minutes to listen to 3 tracks of music posted at one time. I post one track a day and barely get any listens.

My suggestion is to maybe listen to some techno you like and compare those mixes to yours. That might help you figure out what you need to work on.

Welcome to the forum.

recursive one
KVRAF
4118 posts since 7 Feb, 2013

Re: My new techno tracks, tell me what you think !

Post Fri Aug 30, 2019 12:44 am

Listned to Der Panzer.

Not bad, but the synths sound way too thin, especially contrasted by the kick. Also I understand techno is supposed be very repetitive but still some more variations wouldn't hurt, maybe some extra synths or percussion here and there or more automations would help to make it more interesting.
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