Film Soundtrack - Forgotten Abbey
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 386 posts since 14 Feb, 2013
I've made a soundtrack for my up-coming (currently still in-the-making) animation reconstructing a medieval abbey using CGI.
As this everything is still in the making, I'd like to get some feedback/critique on my composition so far:
https://soundcloud.com/mediumaevum-arti ... iars-abbey
As this everything is still in the making, I'd like to get some feedback/critique on my composition so far:
https://soundcloud.com/mediumaevum-arti ... iars-abbey
- KVRAF
- 1973 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Nice.
I would like to hear something going on in the lower octaves.
You've got a mid-octave string ostinato going on, but nought in the lower octaves. Maybe some gritty low brass? After all, a piece about knights and castles needs some weight to it.
You have some good boom percussion. How about some Timpani rolls?
I would like to hear something going on in the lower octaves.
You've got a mid-octave string ostinato going on, but nought in the lower octaves. Maybe some gritty low brass? After all, a piece about knights and castles needs some weight to it.
You have some good boom percussion. How about some Timpani rolls?
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 386 posts since 14 Feb, 2013
Thanks for the ideas. I will strongly consider them.Bansaw wrote: ↑Sat Sep 14, 2019 12:39 am Nice.
I would like to hear something going on in the lower octaves.
You've got a mid-octave string ostinato going on, but nought in the lower octaves. Maybe some gritty low brass? After all, a piece about knights and castles needs some weight to it.
You have some good boom percussion. How about some Timpani rolls?
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- KVRAF
- 3089 posts since 4 May, 2012
You have certainly captured the vibe. Not sure if that bell sound is too regular.
I agree that there could be a little more low end. Those low strings could be brought up.
I agree that there could be a little more low end. Those low strings could be brought up.