Film Soundtrack - Forgotten Abbey

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mediumaevum
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184 posts since 14 Feb, 2013

Post Fri Sep 13, 2019 6:53 am

I've made a soundtrack for my up-coming (currently still in-the-making) animation reconstructing a medieval abbey using CGI.

As this everything is still in the making, I'd like to get some feedback/critique on my composition so far:

https://soundcloud.com/mediumaevum-arti ... iars-abbey

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Bansaw
KVRian
710 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Film Soundtrack - Forgotten Abbey

Post Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:39 pm

Nice.
I would like to hear something going on in the lower octaves.
You've got a mid-octave string ostinato going on, but nought in the lower octaves. Maybe some gritty low brass? After all, a piece about knights and castles needs some weight to it.
You have some good boom percussion. How about some Timpani rolls?

mediumaevum
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184 posts since 14 Feb, 2013

Re: Film Soundtrack - Forgotten Abbey

Post Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:40 pm

Bansaw wrote:
Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:39 pm
Nice.
I would like to hear something going on in the lower octaves.
You've got a mid-octave string ostinato going on, but nought in the lower octaves. Maybe some gritty low brass? After all, a piece about knights and castles needs some weight to it.
You have some good boom percussion. How about some Timpani rolls?
Thanks for the ideas. I will strongly consider them.

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Unaspected
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942 posts since 4 May, 2012

Re: Film Soundtrack - Forgotten Abbey

Post Wed Sep 18, 2019 11:11 am

You have certainly captured the vibe. Not sure if that bell sound is too regular.

I agree that there could be a little more low end. Those low strings could be brought up.

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