The Beginning (Indie Dance)

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fastlanephil
KVRian
821 posts since 3 Jan, 2016

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Mon Sep 23, 2019 4:13 pm

It sounds like a good dance tune. It’s kind of ruined by that loud synth that comes in. I don’t think it works.

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Bansaw
KVRian
756 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Mon Sep 23, 2019 4:51 pm

Loved it until 0:56 (good mixing, good vibe). Sorry, I also think that the saw-synth is not the best sound choice for the song.

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mcanicos
KVRist
62 posts since 17 Oct, 2005

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Tue Sep 24, 2019 1:25 am

Thanks for your opinions ;)

aaron aardvark
KVRAF
1611 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Wed Oct 02, 2019 7:58 pm

mcanicos,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: Clairvoyance mix: I think it sounds good, though I agree with the others that the loud lead synth is a bit annoying at times (in both mixes). The song sounds danceable, which is good. Original mix: this mix seems to have more bass, which sounds different, but not necessarily better or worse.

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mcanicos
KVRist
62 posts since 17 Oct, 2005

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Thu Oct 03, 2019 3:58 am

aaron aardvark wrote:
Wed Oct 02, 2019 7:58 pm
mcanicos,
Thank you for the review! Now your song: Clairvoyance mix: I think it sounds good, though I agree with the others that the loud lead synth is a bit annoying at times (in both mixes). The song sounds danceable, which is good. Original mix: this mix seems to have more bass, which sounds different, but not necessarily better or worse.
Thanks aaron,Yes original mix have more bass,is inherent to this mix.
about lead, because they are tastes, sales do not think the same;)

Thanks again!Regards!

recursive one
KVRAF
4171 posts since 7 Feb, 2013

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Thu Oct 03, 2019 10:34 am

I think the saw synth is totally fine in the original version, in the remix it is mixed way too loud/in your face.

But overall I liked both versions. Really well done.
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Benedict
KVRAF
3025 posts since 5 Mar, 2004 from Gold Coast Australia

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Thu Oct 03, 2019 5:33 pm

I'm going completely the opposite way here (as I seem prone to do - but not deliberately):

I started with the new mix (page order) and was pretty meh on the musical side of the track until that lead comes in. It DOMINATES, which appears to be the whole idea of that sound. Up to that point, there is not a lot going on (nicely mixed tho) then here is the Hero strutting about. I Like that. Being bold is great.

The original mix is not so clear, it is wee bit muffled, which is a shame. But I do like that there is more going on from the start. A bit of a clash of Latin influenced Hi-NRG with Post House. But I find in both cases, just as the track starts going melodically it fades. Was this deliberate?

:-)

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mcanicos
KVRist
62 posts since 17 Oct, 2005

Re: The Beginning (Indie Dance)

Post Fri Oct 04, 2019 5:56 am

Benedict wrote:
Thu Oct 03, 2019 5:33 pm
I'm going completely the opposite way here (as I seem prone to do - but not deliberately):

I started with the new mix (page order) and was pretty meh on the musical side of the track until that lead comes in. It DOMINATES, which appears to be the whole idea of that sound. Up to that point, there is not a lot going on (nicely mixed tho) then here is the Hero strutting about. I Like that. Being bold is great.

The original mix is not so clear, it is wee bit muffled, which is a shame. But I do like that there is more going on from the start. A bit of a clash of Latin influenced Hi-NRG with Post House. But I find in both cases, just as the track starts going melodically it fades. Was this deliberate?

:-)
First Thanks for listening.But a question have your listen the full versions?.(soundcloud audios are just demo fragments)
The original mix is mixed in another studio,not mine,this is the reason to be a little bit muffled.And yes it was deliberated.
Thanks again!
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