Ignorant Fool

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Karma_tba
KVRian
1100 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Post Thu Jan 02, 2020 6:52 pm

A new track for the Nu Year!! :party:
A life lesson learned the hard way.
https://soundcloud.com/karma_tba/ignorant-fool

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wagtunes
KVRAF
17929 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Fri Jan 03, 2020 8:33 am

Something different. Cool.

Dillinger
KVRist
273 posts since 2 Apr, 2016

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Fri Jan 03, 2020 9:08 am

Good lyrics. A very Nu Lou vide. Reed that is.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
17929 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Fri Jan 03, 2020 9:29 am

Dillinger wrote:
Fri Jan 03, 2020 9:08 am
Good lyrics. A very Nu Lou vide. Reed that is.
Yeah, definitely reminds me of Lou Reed.

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Bansaw
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861 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Fri Jan 03, 2020 5:44 pm

I would not have the rattling percussive sound in every bar. I think it makes things a little messy.
However, apart from that I really like this track. I love the vibe, the story. The guitar and sax are good. I think this is one of your best ones.

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Karma_tba
KVRian
1100 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Sat Jan 04, 2020 9:43 am

Big thanks to all.

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Karma_tba
KVRian
1100 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Sat Jan 04, 2020 10:49 am

Bansaw wrote:
Fri Jan 03, 2020 5:44 pm
I would not have the rattling percussive sound in every bar. I think it makes things a little messy.
However, apart from that I really like this track. I love the vibe, the story. The guitar and sax are good. I think this is one of your best ones.
After listening with a focus on that sound I could hear what you mean. Thanks for the heads up. Happy Nu Year!

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el-bo (formerly ebow)
KVRAF
15391 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Sun Jan 05, 2020 1:29 pm

This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one) :tu:

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Karma_tba
KVRian
1100 posts since 12 Aug, 2004

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Sun Jan 05, 2020 9:29 pm

el-bo (formerly ebow) wrote:
Sun Jan 05, 2020 1:29 pm
This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one) :tu:
Never sure what to say because each piece I do only gets the effort equal to the enjoyment that it brings me. Glad you seem to like it I liked it too. :)
Last edited by Karma_tba on Mon Jan 06, 2020 8:55 am, edited 1 time in total.

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el-bo (formerly ebow)
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15391 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away

Re: Ignorant Fool

Post Mon Jan 06, 2020 3:00 am

Karma_tba wrote:
Sun Jan 05, 2020 9:29 pm
el-bo (formerly ebow) wrote:
Sun Jan 05, 2020 1:29 pm
This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one) :tu:
Never sure what to say because each piece I do I only gets the effort equal to the enjoyment that it brings me. Glad you seem to like it I liked it too. :)
I get it. It's a shame, though :shrug:

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