Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

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Zeekuh
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18 posts since 21 Jan, 2020

Post Sat Feb 08, 2020 12:38 pm

https://soundcloud.com/zeekuh/liquid-dn ... h-hourglas

Had real fun doing this one, i have improved my skills a bit but i feel there is still some to learn so figured i'd make a post here for some feedback.

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Zeekuh

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wagtunes
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18155 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

Post Sat Feb 08, 2020 12:56 pm

Well, the vocals are quite muffled in places but, oddly, it actually makes the song more interesting for me. Maybe with them more up front I'd like it more but I actually enjoyed listening to this. In fact, it's one of the more interesting tracks of this genre that I've heard here in a long time.

Well done. :tu:

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Zeekuh
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18 posts since 21 Jan, 2020

Re: Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

Post Sun Feb 09, 2020 12:08 am

wagtunes wrote:
Sat Feb 08, 2020 12:56 pm
Well, the vocals are quite muffled in places but, oddly, it actually makes the song more interesting for me. Maybe with them more up front I'd like it more but I actually enjoyed listening to this. In fact, it's one of the more interesting tracks of this genre that I've heard here in a long time.

Well done. :tu:
Thanks for the input :) It warms my hearth to hear you enjoyed it.
- Adjusted compression on drop vocal chop
- Redid eq a bit on vocals and instruments to enhance vocals
- Added some sub drops on hooks i forgot last night :oops:
- Adjusted kick a little bit since i felt it wasnt coming through the mix properly.

https://soundcloud.com/zeekuh/liquid-dn ... h-hourglas

callel
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5 posts since 14 Feb, 2017

Re: Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

Post Sun Feb 09, 2020 2:27 am

Great work with the voice, the drums and the sound design, it was a real pleasure to listen to your track. I don't have any idea to improve this...and I always have ideas^^ so you should propose your track to a D&B label I think you can be accept with a lot of them

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Bansaw
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892 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

Post Mon Feb 10, 2020 5:20 pm

It was enjoyable and interesting to listen to.
In some places in the mix though, you have too many elements competing at the same time.
My advice would be to simplify. Sometimes less is more, especially in the "verse". The chorus can be busier.
@2:01 I really like that chorus!
For some reason I have urge to listen to Utah Saints, "Something Good"

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Zeekuh
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18 posts since 21 Jan, 2020

Re: Back with another Liquid DnB Track - looking for some feedback

Post Mon Feb 10, 2020 7:04 pm

callel wrote:
Sun Feb 09, 2020 2:27 am
Great work with the voice, the drums and the sound design, it was a real pleasure to listen to your track. I don't have any idea to improve this...and I always have ideas^^ so you should propose your track to a D&B label I think you can be accept with a lot of them
Thank you!
Bansaw wrote:
Mon Feb 10, 2020 5:20 pm
It was enjoyable and interesting to listen to.
In some places in the mix though, you have too many elements competing at the same time.
My advice would be to simplify. Sometimes less is more, especially in the "verse". The chorus can be busier.
@2:01 I really like that chorus!
For some reason I have urge to listen to Utah Saints, "Something Good"
Thanks for input, will carry your tips with me for the next songs! Glad you liked it.
-Adjusted bassline during postdrop for less movement.
https://soundcloud.com/zeekuh/liquid-dn ... h-hourglas

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