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werners
KVRer
28 posts since 31 Jan, 2015

Post Tue Feb 18, 2020 6:25 am

Whit a major boring track in A minor :)

have fun

https://soundcloud.com/user-601993018/mofo-master

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wagtunes
KVRAF
18459 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

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Post Tue Feb 18, 2020 6:51 am

Yep, after 30 seconds I was bored and almost turned it off. But around 40 seconds at least something started to develop. Not a lot but at least something. Problem with the track is that it's simply not long enough for all the subtle little arrangement "additions" to keep the interest, especially with a relatively static Am - G chord progression. The breakdown at 2:20 helps a little but then it's back to Am - G with very little going on.

The mix itself is fine. But there's just nothing here to hold interest. Not for 4 minutes.

My 2 cents FWTW.

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thecontrolcentre
KVRAF
26669 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny

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Post Tue Feb 18, 2020 7:13 am

Needs a hook or melody line ... the mix is ok.

werners
KVRer
28 posts since 31 Jan, 2015

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Post Tue Feb 18, 2020 9:04 am

Thanks for the replies
Yes it is boring and that is somewhat the intention
Between the house, trapp, hip hop, rock ambient, trance, ect tracks
where everyone does his / her best to stand out, this is just ..... nothing / something

maybe next song :)

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wagtunes
KVRAF
18459 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

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Post Tue Feb 18, 2020 9:19 am

werners wrote:
Tue Feb 18, 2020 9:04 am
Thanks for the replies
Yes it is boring and that is somewhat the intention
Between the house, trapp, hip hop, rock ambient, trance, ect tracks
where everyone does his / her best to stand out, this is just ..... nothing / something

maybe next song :)
Then I gotta ask, what's the point? Don't we have enough stuff that's just blah without intentionally adding to it? Don't we at least want to make an attempt to do something worth while? We don't always succeed. I know I don't, but at least try?

Anyway, you went for something throw away and boring and you succeeded.

Congratulations. :tu:

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