Razzor (Electronic)

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WilliamK
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5103 posts since 12 Jun, 2001 from Wusik Dot Com

Post Sat Feb 22, 2020 8:28 am


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Death Row Archie
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Re: Razzor (Electronic)

Post Sun Feb 23, 2020 3:34 pm

Nice downtempo groove. Bass is nice and warm and sits right in the mix IMO. Nice synth line on top. Nice breakdown around 1:30. The drums are kinda lifeless IMO -- could use some variation in the pattern and some processing. I think there's a lot of good ideas here, maybe a few too many -- the arrangement would benefit from more "unity" if that makes sense: There's some thematic coherence in places, but elsewhere it feels like ideas strung together. Overall a mixed bag IMO -- mostly good. My .02.

Will be posting some of my music soon.

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WilliamK
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5103 posts since 12 Jun, 2001 from Wusik Dot Com

Re: Razzor (Electronic)

Post Sun Feb 23, 2020 4:30 pm

Wow, thanks, very detailed. :Hug: I think the bass is making the kick low. Need to mess up with side chaining a bit more...

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