Electronic WIP - Not sure where to go from here

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Raphie
KVRist
56 posts since 14 Feb, 2009

Post Sun Mar 22, 2020 1:36 am

Some work I've been doing on this track. I like the parts, but struggle a bit arranging, not 100% condifent about the piano, but not sure what to do with it.

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https://soundcloud.com/raphiegrooves/untitled-wip

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KVRAF
4600 posts since 7 Feb, 2013

Re: Electronic WIP - Not sure where to go from here

Post Sun Mar 22, 2020 2:13 am

I liked everything including the piano (if you'd like to change something about it i'd suggest making it more "spacious", like maybe more reverb or echo, but that's not necessary)

Very nice track. Could be a bit longer though.
You may think you can fly ... but you better not try

Raphie
KVRist
56 posts since 14 Feb, 2009

Re: Electronic WIP - Not sure where to go from here

Post Sun Mar 22, 2020 2:25 am

I quickly arranged all the parts together, now need to expand them to a track. Not sure to take a progressive or verse/chorus approach.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
18462 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Electronic WIP - Not sure where to go from here

Post Sun Mar 22, 2020 4:18 am

I like it. Has kind of a mysterious vibe to it. I agree that it could be longer. I'd also like to hear lyrics put to this. I think it would make a great pop song.

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Raphie
KVRist
56 posts since 14 Feb, 2009

Re: Electronic WIP - Not sure where to go from here

Post Sun Mar 22, 2020 9:52 am

ThnX, will try to make it into a track

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