Far Away [indie/electronic]

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MellowMoods
KVRer
2 posts since 25 Mar, 2020

Post Wed Mar 25, 2020 2:50 pm

Hey guys, I made a sort of relaxing Indie/electronic song. Tried to mix some electronics with acoustic elements. I think it worked out quite well, but please tell me what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/mellow_moods/far-away

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wagtunes
KVRAF
18460 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Far Away [indie/electronic]

Post Wed Mar 25, 2020 2:56 pm

Welcome to the forum.

Takes a long time to start and very soft. Really need to raise the volume on the mix buss. Mix itself is kind of flat. On the plus side, musically it's pleasant. But there's very little life to it, even for a "relaxing" song.

Needs lots of work.

MellowMoods
KVRer
2 posts since 25 Mar, 2020

Re: Far Away [indie/electronic]

Post Wed Mar 25, 2020 3:00 pm

wagtunes wrote:
Wed Mar 25, 2020 2:56 pm
Welcome to the forum.

Takes a long time to start and very soft. Really need to raise the volume on the mix buss. Mix itself is kind of flat. On the plus side, musically it's pleasant. But there's very little life to it, even for a "relaxing" song.

Needs lots of work.
Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will scour the forums for learning opportunity's.

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Bansaw
KVRian
969 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Far Away [indie/electronic]

Post Wed Mar 25, 2020 3:44 pm

I think the music fits well with the theme. In these days we do need to be taken to a restful beach in the Caribbean!
It does need a lot of mixing work though. Nice guitar @2:08 and section , chord progression was very nice. I would say "mix it and repost it" so we can enjoy it.

Erisian
KVRist
58 posts since 21 Mar, 2020 from Gothenburg, Sweden

Re: Far Away [indie/electronic]

Post Thu Mar 26, 2020 5:38 am

Quite an advanced composition. I particularly enjoyed the guitar work.

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