Hello all, starting to transition from Logic to Reaper so I busted out the Shure and my beater acoustic. Thanks for listening!
https://soundcloud.com/blindcrake/kayenta
"Kayenta" by Blindcrake [acoustic-ish ambient]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 216 posts since 18 Feb, 2011 from Hawaii
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- KVRAF
- 2269 posts since 10 Jul, 2008 from Orbit NE US
Cool tune.
gadgets an gizmos..make noise https://soundcloud.com/crystalawareness Restocked: 3/24
old stuff http://ww.dancingbearaudioresearch.com/
if this post is edited -it was for punctuation, grammar, or to make it coherent (or make me seem coherent).
old stuff http://ww.dancingbearaudioresearch.com/
if this post is edited -it was for punctuation, grammar, or to make it coherent (or make me seem coherent).
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- KVRer
- 29 posts since 28 May, 2020 from SF, CA
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 216 posts since 18 Feb, 2011 from Hawaii
Thank you both!
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Heavenly Sounds Heavenly Sounds https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=437597 - KVRian
- 906 posts since 18 Mar, 2019
Itsa nice but its a pretty the same the whole time... I think it could do with a bit more variation.
I am halfway the song and I do not really want to listen further I am afraid because its just the same over and over again. Maybe adding new instruments and patterns over time could delete that problem.
You have a nice base here but you should implent a instrument which you can play a melody with in my opinion.
I am halfway the song and I do not really want to listen further I am afraid because its just the same over and over again. Maybe adding new instruments and patterns over time could delete that problem.
You have a nice base here but you should implent a instrument which you can play a melody with in my opinion.
Heavenly Sounds Approved This.
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Again, had to listen after reading Mozex comments. There are some subtle variations in the arrangement but you really have to listen for them. A melody line would have helped this one a lot but it is in no way as bad as Mozex makes it sound. Just needs a little love to make it a little more interesting enough to listen all the way through (which I did by the way but could have turned if off at the 2 minute mark)
All that aside, some very nice sounds on this one. It's actually a whisker away from being a really nice song.
All that aside, some very nice sounds on this one. It's actually a whisker away from being a really nice song.
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Heavenly Sounds Heavenly Sounds https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=437597
- KVRian
- 906 posts since 18 Mar, 2019
Never said it was bad, just that it could do with a bit more variation.
Heavenly Sounds Approved This.
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240 - KVRAF
- 35183 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
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- KVRist
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- 216 posts since 18 Feb, 2011 from Hawaii
I mean this with the utmost respect, especially for someone who took the time to listen to my track. But no. That's not me, wasn't me and won't be me. I usually do 10 minute noise drones and this is about as much variation as you're gonna get.Mozex wrote: ↑Sat May 30, 2020 6:38 pm Itsa nice but its a pretty the same the whole time... I think it could do with a bit more variation.
I am halfway the song and I do not really want to listen further I am afraid because its just the same over and over again. Maybe adding new instruments and patterns over time could delete that problem.
You have a nice base here but you should implent a instrument which you can play a melody with in my opinion.
And I'm not saying you're wrong, you're more than likely right in the traditional sense, but no... I write for me. That sounds incredibly harsh, egotistical, etc. But the thing you would be interested in listening to I wouldn't have an interest to write.
But I very much appreciate you listening and your opinion (honestly!).
Thank you both for listening!wagtunes wrote: ↑Sat May 30, 2020 7:07 pm Again, had to listen after reading Mozex comments. There are some subtle variations in the arrangement but you really have to listen for them. A melody line would have helped this one a lot but it is in no way as bad as Mozex makes it sound. Just needs a little love to make it a little more interesting enough to listen all the way through (which I did by the way but could have turned if off at the 2 minute mark)
All that aside, some very nice sounds on this one. It's actually a whisker away from being a really nice song.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 216 posts since 18 Feb, 2011 from Hawaii
Thanks for listening
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- KVRAF
- 3879 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
Oooh, that was nice. Very well done, very evocative. Somehow, it fit my current mood like a glove, and I totally lost myself for a few minutes. I actually wish it could have been a bit longer, the ending's quite abrupt. Thanks very much for sharing!
