Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

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frackermak
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204 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Post Wed Jun 10, 2020 9:45 am

I've remixed one of my old songs with me on vocals. I wanted to play with Melodyne 5.
Primarily featuring Dune 3 and VPS Avenger.
How's the production? :hyper:

Thanks in advance for any feedback. :tu:

https://soundcloud.com/screamershock/ro ... up5RAsPapy

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excuse me please
KVRian
505 posts since 10 Oct, 2018

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Wed Jun 10, 2020 9:52 am

Long story short: needs more lift off lift off lift off lift off....

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layzer
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6809 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Wed Jun 10, 2020 10:51 am

hows the production? IMO, its overall sound is rather "squashed"
i did enjoy the song itself, catchy stuff. :tu:
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nix808
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4272 posts since 22 Jul, 2006 from Tasmania, Australia

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Wed Jun 10, 2020 11:31 am

she is an a appreciable punk experiment
fair play

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frackermak
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204 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Thu Jun 11, 2020 1:14 am

Thanks for the replies.
Squashed. Yes...
There is a little compression on the master bus.
Maybe the vocal a bit brighter?
More work on the EQ.
Will try referencing another song.
No idea which one! :D

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frackermak
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204 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Thu Jun 11, 2020 6:20 am

Updated version now online :tu:

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excuse me please
KVRian
505 posts since 10 Oct, 2018

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Thu Jun 11, 2020 6:57 am

Sounds far better now. That said, some days things sound better than other days.

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Bansaw
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1156 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Thu Jun 11, 2020 4:12 pm

Nice.
Avenger is a top synth.
The beginning for me, was a bit mid-rangy.
The melody etc. were quite unique and interesting.
Reminded me a bit of Gary Numan.
:tu:

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frackermak
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204 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Fri Jun 12, 2020 2:06 am

Bansaw wrote:
Thu Jun 11, 2020 4:12 pm
Nice.
Avenger is a top synth.
The beginning for me, was a bit mid-rangy.
The melody etc. were quite unique and interesting.
Reminded me a bit of Gary Numan.
:tu:
Thanks chaps. Nice to know I'm on the right track. 👍

Gary Numan is my all time favourite artist. 😊

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frackermak
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204 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Re: Upbeat happy poppy 80's synthy type thing..

Post Mon Jun 15, 2020 8:47 am

Thanks for all the feedback.
Now offline..

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