Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

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Frantz
KVRAF
5348 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sat Jun 27, 2020 8:00 pm

A dark and dancy synthpop tune. Aika Zabala provided additional vocals and magic.

https://soundcloud.com/fragilegods/twoworlds

FragileGods_TwoWorlds.mp3

Any feedback is appreciated. The lyrics are on Soundcloud. Thanks for listening.

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htcnext2
KVRist
437 posts since 3 Jul, 2017

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Sun Jun 28, 2020 1:28 am

Nice stuff. Especially enjoyed the wonky synths around min 2..

enroe
KVRian
1243 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Sun Jun 28, 2020 3:10 am

Really nice! Very rhythmic with an incredibly inspiring voice.
Well rounded composition.

The very deep vocal fragments at 2:00 give the whole thing
something mysterious. The song is almost a bit too short,
which is great! :tu:
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wagtunes
KVRAF
19378 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Sun Jun 28, 2020 4:27 am

Ah, it's always nice to hear new stuff from you. I know I'm gonna like it before I even put it on. Still love that voice of yours. So cool sounding. In this one you have a little Lou Reed poking out.

Anyway, great mix as always. Love the synth work and the background voices. I could absolutely imagine this on the radio in the 80s.

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Bansaw
KVRian
1153 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Mon Jun 29, 2020 10:13 am

Like it. Beginning reminded me of Depeche Mode somewhat.
I think the female vocal adds to the song in terms of relationship, and tension and she has a quality voice. She did the vowel sounds "Ah" good.
1:44 change of chord, I'm still trying to think if I like that or not. It does create some contrast though.
2:24 nice delay pluck
I must get myself a female vocalist!

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Frantz
KVRAF
5348 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Wed Jul 01, 2020 8:05 am

htcnext2 wrote:
Sun Jun 28, 2020 1:28 am
Nice stuff. Especially enjoyed the wonky synths around min 2..
Thanks for the listen! I thought it needed a little wonkiness there as a change of pace. :)

(I may work on this mix a bit more. I think the chorus could use a bit of EQ'ing.)

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markkuja
KVRian
905 posts since 28 Oct, 2005 from Finland

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Thu Jul 02, 2020 1:37 pm

Nice stuff. Enjoyable to listen to well done song. Sounds good.

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Frantz
KVRAF
5348 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Sun Jul 05, 2020 6:15 pm

enroe wrote:
Sun Jun 28, 2020 3:10 am
Really nice! Very rhythmic with an incredibly inspiring voice.
Well rounded composition.

The very deep vocal fragments at 2:00 give the whole thing
something mysterious. The song is almost a bit too short,
which is great! :tu:
I'm glad you enjoyed the composition and vocals.

I did keep try to keep it short and interesting. The longer I worked on it, the more sections I removed to prevent boredom from setting in. If I worked on it for another a month, the song might have ended up 10 seconds long. :hihi:

Thanks for your comments.

curtiscole
KVRer
11 posts since 25 Jun, 2020

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Mon Jul 06, 2020 5:45 am

nice! vocals could use a little less highs IMO but other than that sounds great! Keep it up!

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Zombie Queen
KVRAF
4641 posts since 1 Aug, 2005 from Warszawa, Poland

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Mon Jul 06, 2020 9:27 am

Smells like 80s, especially the break at 2:00. That's always a good thing, more so as 80's are becoming somewhat distant past.

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jancivil
KVRAF
20085 posts since 20 Oct, 2007 from No Location

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Mon Jul 06, 2020 1:41 pm

I appreciate the decision to just wrap it up after the bridge, where typically the hook is belabored or tortured incessantly.
I really think 2 and a half minutes-ish is proper.
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JCJR
KVRAF
2977 posts since 17 Apr, 2005 from S.E. TN

Re: Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"

Post Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:35 pm

Sounds good. Has a slight kraftwerkian reminiscense. I like the tight and tidy bass tone and balance.

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