Astronaut (Progressive Psy Trance)

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PabloHassan
KVRer
13 posts since 27 Apr, 2005

Post Fri Jul 03, 2020 11:11 pm

Here's a new song I am working on. All feedback will be appreciated. :tu:

https://soundcloud.com/reminiscence/astronaut-draft

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Morgaxx
KVRist
482 posts since 29 Feb, 2004 from Toronto

Post Sat Jul 04, 2020 7:46 am

I enjoyed your track. The change at 3:38 was unexpected and pleasing. Some nice sounds and a driving arrangement. My only thing is I would like more tie in with the opening elements, toward the end. The final section seemed like a different track to me. Still, nice work.
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Bansaw
KVRian
1199 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Jul 04, 2020 6:32 pm

1:08 very good, and rhythmically creative, 1:22.
That dissonant drone coming in-and-out I'd have ditched that and faded that away around 1:20, but it just hung around for a long time.
The track kept me interested and it was enjoyable to hear how much creativity you put into it.

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KVRAF
4969 posts since 7 Feb, 2013

Post Tue Jul 07, 2020 12:33 am

Overall it's nice and has some potential.

I think the kick/bass need to be stronger and punchier. Also I'd work more on the arrangement and musical progression. E.g., the ending section had some nice synths at about 5:15, i thought they would mark the start of a new melodic or rhytmic line but they just dissapeared. It seems like you put the most creative effort into the the first 3-4 minutes of the track but then you got tired and just left the rest as it was with some random unconnected parts.
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PabloHassan
KVRer
13 posts since 27 Apr, 2005

Post Tue Jul 07, 2020 7:18 am

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