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Spring Goose
KVRian
980 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Sun Jul 05, 2020 2:28 am

I've recently got an Avantone Mixcube, and now i can hear detail which i couldn't before. I'm still relatively new to mixing. This is my best/favourite "song"/track ATM.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/funky-deep-g-mixd

What can you tell me about my mix, or about the song/track? Moving on from last time i was told "all your "songs" are boring" and "i could train a 5 year old to make better song than you".

Spring Goose
KVRian
980 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Mon Jul 06, 2020 6:25 am

Here's another. This one is a dirty sexy DISCO-HOUSE track.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd

Spring Goose
KVRian
980 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Wed Jul 08, 2020 12:33 am

Here's another. I don't know which genre i'd call it. I suppose i'll have to call it progressive house because i don't know where else it fits in.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d ... 4bcivHc6FX

Say something about my song/s (track/s), if you'd like.

aaron aardvark
KVRAF
1815 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles

Post Thu Jul 16, 2020 8:19 pm

Spring Goose,
Thank you for the reviews! Now listening to "Funky Deep G": the audio sounds a bit muffled. The vocals definitely add something. Instrumentally it is pretty repetitive. I guess it depends on your intentions. If you hope to have catchy melodies that stick in your brain, or that you want to hum along with, then I say it could use some work. If you want something to zone out on, like trance, then it succeeds. Now listening to "D# Disco": this has much better audio quality! I like the synths at around 1:05. The vocal clips definitely add to the song. The rising synth is nice. This is definitely danceable, and has much better melodies in my opinion. A bit repetitive; I would have made it shorter; though if you kept dancing on the dance floor, I'm OK with that. Overall, I like this much better than "Funky Deep G". Nice. Now listening to "Dream Vocal G": better audio quality than "Funky Deep G". The first 2 minutes, and other parts are rather repetitive for me. The vocals definitely add to the song. I like "D# Disco" by far the best of the 3.

Spring Goose
KVRian
980 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Thu Jul 16, 2020 11:52 pm

Thanks Aaron Aardvark.

Spring Goose
KVRian
980 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Thu Jul 23, 2020 2:22 pm

Updated with a new mix and master. :D

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