weird collab: synths and spoken voice

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jackoo
KVRian
693 posts since 3 Jul, 2006

Post Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:50 am

Hi,

I worked on a collab on Kompoz.
Started from a drum and pad and added all the other synths.
Last week somebody offered to add "spoken voice" to it, and I struggled to edit the vocal track and re-arrange it to the instrumental.

Came up with this:
Track

Would really appreciate your feedback / critique.

Collab page:
https://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/948170

Cheers!
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Frantz
KVRAF
5395 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sun Jul 12, 2020 7:56 pm

I love the music. Very hypnotic with great sounds. It's some of your best.

The vocals are a good idea but sometimes I think her voice is too strident. If she could possibly redo it with a more gentle and soothing voice, it would blend better.

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jackoo
KVRian
693 posts since 3 Jul, 2006

Post Mon Jul 13, 2020 12:44 am

Thank you very much, Frantz!

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