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OwenDavidson
KVRer
23 posts since 13 Dec, 2019

Post Wed Jul 22, 2020 11:57 pm

Hey everyone, I hope you are well.
I just finished this and I would greatly appreciate some constructive feedback for it. A few things I was considering changing is the length of the kick, also a way to make the second drop more unique, but I'm open for any suggestions!

https://soundcloud.com/owen-davidson-2/ ... synYwPphHJ

Thank you guys so much,
Owen. :)

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Bansaw
KVRian
1199 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Thu Jul 23, 2020 4:21 pm

0:32 first drop is weak. Generally you build up to a drop and release the tension.
But there was no tension to release.
Hi-percussion to loud in the mix. Song really starts at 1:12. I think the intro is too long.
Also, not enough variation happening to keep me interested.

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layzer
KVRAF
6905 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Thu Jul 23, 2020 6:12 pm

its ok as a foundation... it lacks some drum pattern changes and some kind of lead melodies. (just arps and stabs dont cut it to keep interest)
and an interesting bassline, not just long drones would help.
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