Electronica 150bpm 5 minutes

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Spring Goose
KVRian
977 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Sun Jul 26, 2020 2:06 am

I appreciate the feedback if you want to say something about it.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/f ... NN0STNwf4z

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wagtunes
KVRAF
19706 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Post Sun Jul 26, 2020 5:42 am

Some of the transitions are a little sudden and jarring but all in all, not bad. Would liked a little melody line over some of the parts. The cut off end was very bad. You can have a cold stop but this just sounded like it was cut off mid stream.

Needs a little work but like I said, not bad. Mix is fine.

Spring Goose
KVRian
977 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 6:19 am

Thanks for feedback Wagtunes. :)

silenthill2006
KVRian
534 posts since 16 Nov, 2006

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 9:09 am

I have to agree with WagTunes. Some of the The transitions are very jarring. The track then just stops and starts up again. The transitions need to be a lot smoother more more connective parts and a melody that is tying it together. I would like to hear some fade-in of elements that you introduce. I really don't like the stopping and starting. I see what you are going for but it doesn't feel cohesive. I do like the overall sounds and the mix though. The cutoff at the end was very abrupt as well.
Software: Reason 10, Acid Pro 8, Reaper, Sibelius, Musescore, RapidComposer, Captain Plugins

https://soundcloud.com/devin-cooper-620205327
http://www.soundclick.com/shoestring

Spring Goose
KVRian
977 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:26 am

Thanks for the feedback silenthill2006.

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Bansaw
KVRian
1199 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 11:00 am

I liked the section that began at 3:11.
But as has been stated above, the transitions between sections is too jarring.
3:46 - the percussive hits are a bit too loud.
Other parts of the song were enjoyable though.

Spring Goose
KVRian
977 posts since 31 Jan, 2020

Post Mon Jul 27, 2020 11:53 am

Thanks Bansaw for the feedback.

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