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frackermak
KVRist
229 posts since 22 Nov, 2018 from UK

Post Sat Sep 05, 2020 6:52 am

Bit loud this one.
Lots of distorted guitars.
Still melodic though...
Experimenting with a new vocal style. Sort of a Southern US rock drawl...
Love to hear what you think. :D
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layzer
KVRAF
7195 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Sat Sep 05, 2020 1:16 pm

yes loud, but not over the top un-listenable. you retained clarity with dynamic range.
i dig the song itself, good catchy chorus.
always liked the combination of heavy guitars
with synth sounds.
success on the vocal style, i like it.
im a huge Ministry fan :hihi:
nice work :tu:

boy, the forum been hopping with some good ones lately :D
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jethrobull
KVRAF
2129 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Post Sun Sep 06, 2020 2:22 am

Menacing stuff! Brilliant mix and arrangement. Vocals are awesome. Really enjoyed, fantastic work! :tu:
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Frantz
KVRAF
5436 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sun Sep 06, 2020 8:21 am

An extremely cool framework for a song but it is quite sparse as if you haven't added all of the topline elements. The mix is excellent. :tu:

The new vocal style sounds very good but could be louder and clearer.

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layzer
KVRAF
7195 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Sun Sep 06, 2020 2:45 pm

Frantz wrote:
Sun Sep 06, 2020 8:21 am
quite sparse as if you haven't added all of the topline elements.
agreed, i think with some more lyrics in between the already cool chorus
could take it to the next level... something like,
"turned on the news,
theres a killer on the loose
nobodys safe
and the cops have no clues"

lol, frantz is better.
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noylis
KVRist
100 posts since 26 Nov, 2009

Post Mon Sep 07, 2020 4:01 am

Good one mate i enjoyed it

experimental.crow
KVRAF
6463 posts since 9 Mar, 2003 from the bridge of sighs

Post Tue Sep 08, 2020 11:40 am

took me a few listens to make up my mind ...
i like this ...

decent mix ...
it's good work ...
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Allomerus
KVRAF
2468 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia

Post Thu Sep 10, 2020 1:25 am

Great chorus and lots of cool elements. Nice energy too! The vocals are good but a bit quiet and like others have said some extra lines would take it higher!
Well done.
:)
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