Tried to do something different

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KVRian
653 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Post Sun Jan 17, 2021 5:33 am

I tried something else with this track. Instead of making a arp out of everything I used more layers of melodies. I also tried to create a more variated kind of track

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KVRian
722 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK

Post Sun Jan 17, 2021 1:07 pm

Yeah, the melodic content is much more memorable than other pieces...good stuff!

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Those melodic phrases...it's really easy to use too many notes...i often find myself taking out extra notes in my melodies to sharpen them up and improve their flow.

Would've also been nice if you'd gone to a different chord sequence somewhere in the middle maybe?
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KVRian

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653 posts since 18 Mar, 2019

Post Mon Jan 18, 2021 12:40 am

Thank you. Thx for the suggestion but I really aint that skilled. Those two chords are some of the few I still remember and for some reason they fitted the track lol.

Will try to find a solution for other tracks.

The thing with the many notes I can understand. Thing is that I like to talk a lot and use many words. It translates in my music I guess.
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